Seren Roberts Poet Rhyme

Devotion - Poem of Compression Contest

You concealed her
from the prying eyes..
Devotion she did swear
to her Saviour above..
a novice is she
in silent prayer




Contest : Poem of Compression

Penned 21 September 2013 by Seren Roberts

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Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2013 at 8:27 PM Seren ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 9, 2013 at 10:17 AM Seren, congrats on your winning poem! Love that last line...excellent! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A October 8, 2013 at 8:22 PM Seren.......... congrats on your win.......... LOVE ~SKAT~

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2013 at 4:50 PM Enjoyed reading this winning work with a spiritual context..Congrats on your win..Sara

Nette Onclaud October 6, 2013 at 11:53 PM a knock-out in its imagery, sere.. congrats on your win inmy contest.. do drop by my blog; i mentioned you somehow... :) huggs

Olusegun Arowolo October 6, 2013 at 12:47 PM Lovely piece,wonderful write.Great job, Seren.CONGRATULATIONS! Seren Roberts October 7, 2013 at 1:19 AM Thank you my friend .....Seren

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2013 at 1:27 AM this is splendid writing, Seren and a much deserved win. Congratulations. Seren Roberts October 6, 2013 at 2:28 AM Thank you Andrea, I quite liked this one myself which is unusual for me....Seren

Joyce Johnson October 5, 2013 at 5:42 PM Lovely take on the contest. Ccongratulations. Love, Joyce Seren Roberts October 6, 2013 at 2:29 AM Thank you Joyce

Carrie Richards October 5, 2013 at 10:25 AM A lovely poem, and so reverent a feel to it! Congratulations to you Seren!! Seren Roberts October 6, 2013 at 2:30 AM Thank you Carrie .....Seren

Kash Poet October 5, 2013 at 9:23 AM Congratulations Seren!Lovely write. Seren Roberts October 6, 2013 at 2:30 AM Hello Kash longtime no see ....Seren

Arthur Vaso September 22, 2013 at 5:50 PM This is a very beautiful poem, and has meaning on many levels, well done!! Arthur Vaso September 22, 2013 at 5:55 PM your welcome I was out for a stroll! Seren Roberts September 22, 2013 at 5:54 PM Thank you for stopping by and commenting ...Seren

Russell Sivey September 21, 2013 at 7:59 PM Wow, this is such an intriguing and special write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this evening! What a fantastic piece, such a remarkable poem, Great Work!! Seren Roberts September 22, 2013 at 5:53 PM thnk you Russell...Seren

John Loving Iii September 21, 2013 at 3:11 PM still trying to comprehind compresion part. Seren Roberts September 21, 2013 at 3:49 PM sent you a soupmail John