Devotion

Devotion Even though we understand it's not the way we had it planned But, day by day and hour by hour love and truth to give us power Hand in hand we walk alone turning over each new stone Slow but sure we make our way eternity in each new day. (my archives - May 1981)

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Darren White

Date: 5/31/2017 12:43:00 PM

(Haha, Lenna :D I read the conversation with Chris below) Slowly but securely you walk your path, I love this beautiful poem.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/31/2017 12:53:00 PM

Hi Darren :) snicker, giggle.... that was ONLY 36 years ago, haha.. Thanks so much my friend, glad you like it :) :)

Chris Green

Date: 5/31/2017 11:13:00 AM

I love this little but expressive poem and really, 1981???? Lenna, your words and phrases wonderfully paint a picture of devotion. That first stanza opens this so nicely and then the closing...perfect. This was beautiful my friend.

Lenna Walker
Date: 5/31/2017 11:25:00 AM

ahhh, yes, 1981, am I giving away my age ?? haha. Thank You so much Chris, you know your opinion means a lot and I appreciate you my friend !! :)