Devoted To the Sea

devoted to the sea of love or kisses harpooned upon the darkest lips
or just the sea, midnight blue that seaweed wraps, cocoons,
two lovers in lovers art.   the moon in cahoots with ebb and flow
and flowers tangled in her hair, but who cares about timeless fantasy,

fantastical that you are mine, in body gently heating or cooling,
lifting with the frangipani breeze and tender oceanic salt. our derrières
exposed and blossoms of foam frolic, rising, falling, frenetically sliding,
eyes closed in momentum’s meditation.     the sea...the sea...the sea,
explains the utterance of moaning lips, softly playing in lyrical colorwash.


1/6/2020
Brenda Chiri’s Picture Prompt Poetry Contest

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Date: 1/28/2020 12:17:00 AM
Ahh Kim thank you for entering my contest and congrats on your win! I loved where you took this poem referring it to the sea! No others did that it was amazing!;)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/28/2020 7:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, Brenda!
Date: 1/7/2020 8:01:00 AM
This was beautiful Kim. Definitely has a rhythm all its own. Best wishes in the contest
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/7/2020 8:23:00 AM
Thank you, Chris! <3
Date: 1/6/2020 4:17:00 PM
A nice flowing poem Kim :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2020 7:39:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi!
Date: 1/6/2020 3:53:00 PM
such a beautiful write, Kim...I esp. like the blossoms of foam frolicking and the sea...the sea...the sea... it does sound like that sometimes :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/6/2020 3:54:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!
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