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Devil's Wind

A devils wind blew in the stars covered the sky smoke filled the air, not a soul to be heard a ghost town full of fright a wild heart on the loose a gun slinger he'll shoot his love is barren, broken with an arrow on an eagles wing he flie's a devils wind is blowing in one's man love, barren among the crazy hearts now he flie's..

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Dan Kearley

Date: 1/10/2013 11:07:00 AM

Oh spooky,spooky.....Nice! :o)

David Scott

Date: 1/4/2013 6:57:00 AM

GREAT INTROSPECTIVE AND GREAT WRITE XXDAVIDSCOTT

Robert Pettit

Date: 1/4/2013 12:08:00 AM

Reading this reminded me of the lyrics to "Big Iron" by the late Marty Robbins. Nice write, but it can use several spelling corrections: The present tense third person singular form of the verb "to fly" is "flies", not "fly's". Also, "barron" is correctly spelled "barren". In your fourth line, if the ghost town is scared, the correct word you want is "fright". What you have there now is the cargo a plane, train, or truck carries.

Kerry Singleton
Date: 1/4/2013 5:59:00 AM

Thank you for your correction Robert, have a great day :)