Devil Woman

she devil woman turned me into her slave

munipulated my mind and raped my soul

had me pleading and begging for her to stop

yet she crawled on top and began to grind

with her vice grip and her tunnel of hell

she put me into a devil's spell

crying icicles instead of swetting bullets

heart frozen from her devil's snare

killing me softly enjoying every bit

i was lost and confined to her devilish world

blood red lips succulent **** fire hot as she dips in my hips

molding my body into her own creation

turning my world inside out

loosing touch with my own reality

becoming a part of her fantasies

wanting to break free of her spell on me

sentencing me to a life of bondaged love

one drink not enough ten drinks too much

this is what happenes when you fall in love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 3:28 PM
Hot getting hotter, great write Brandy - must open a window>>James
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 12:24 PM
Breathing fire in this one. Vince
Williams Avatar
June 19, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Hi Brandy... very erotic... and the slavery to love.. one drink never enough... great writing Brandy
Devonshire Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 6:58 PM
Chris is right, Brandy! Very passionate write full of intense emotion. Glad to see you posting again! Love, Carolyn
Higgins Avatar
June 18, 2009 at 6:04 PM
blood red lips succulent tits fire hot as she dips in my hips...awesome line..this entire piece is pure fire...just a lovely write...enjoy the sun..one love.
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