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Devil Woman

she devil woman turned me into her slave munipulated my mind and raped my soul had me pleading and begging for her to stop yet she crawled on top and began to grind with her vice grip and her tunnel of hell she put me into a devil's spell crying icicles instead of swetting bullets heart frozen from her devil's snare killing me softly enjoying every bit i was lost and confined to her devilish world blood red lips succulent **** fire hot as she dips in my hips molding my body into her own creation turning my world inside out loosing touch with my own reality becoming a part of her fantasies wanting to break free of her spell on me sentencing me to a life of bondaged love one drink not enough ten drinks too much this is what happenes when you fall in love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/19/2009 3:28:00 PM
Hot getting hotter, great write Brandy - must open a window>>James
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Date: 6/19/2009 12:24:00 PM
Breathing fire in this one. Vince
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Date: 6/19/2009 7:06:00 AM
Hi Brandy... very erotic... and the slavery to love.. one drink never enough... great writing Brandy
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:58:00 PM
Chris is right, Brandy! Very passionate write full of intense emotion. Glad to see you posting again! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/18/2009 6:04:00 PM
blood red lips succulent tits fire hot as she dips in my hips...awesome line..this entire piece is pure fire...just a lovely write...enjoy the sun..one love.
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