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Devil In Me

I had the choice to turn away Losing every innocence in my soul I knew what I was doing... So let the truth be told The craving It tormented my being Forgive me... I lost myself... and the one thing I believed in...

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Celine Soucy

Date: 9/3/2018 9:31:00 PM

Real,raw,transparent. Courageous no doubt.Your lines and choice of pauses forced me to feel the fight, even though it was an undisclosed battle. welcome to human nature. i see it as we’re spiritual beings living a human experience. Great job Manny. keep posting more and build your collection of poems. you have a lot to offer!