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A celebration was held by the Angels, Heavenward late yesterday night. And hide from the moon spirit labels, Eyes staring in the twilight as first light. They needed to escape animosity, And stay away from bitter anger. They took a dim moon with velocity, I held my fun back with a sharp clangor. The moon and heavenly body in the rearview, They inspire a mad dash for the host star. I am in the spirit realm of my bare gyps too, Join the sun club and cross where you are.  Watch out for brimful smiles and sharp gazes, How to hypnotize where sun is in a saffron blaze. Straight hair and a toned body were striking, It erodes and dulls, you can't view a liking. A wicked beast hunts humans for their flesh, She will do it again and the tale will start afresh.  Nobody was aware of her murderous tally, Hundreds may have fallen into an alley. And, as you slept quietly in that stance, She sneaks into the kitchen, sing, and dance. A steak knife was used to cut the meat, She will slice your neck and kill you with conceit.
Written: October 15, 2022 Captivation Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 10/19/2022 10:03:00 AM
Great entry, Lasaad, it was certainly captivating. Devilish and seductive. Your posting an unusual amount of excellent poetry this month, my friend. Write On! Bill
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Date: 10/16/2022 6:08:00 AM
You spin wonderful tales my friend. Keep creating!
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Date: 10/15/2022 9:27:00 PM
I wonder who that wicked beast is.... ! You have created an eerie atmosphere befilling to the Halloween mood in your own way! All the Best in the contest, dear friend...
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Date: 10/15/2022 11:45:00 AM
A thoughtful and intricate Halloween tale, carrying much gravitas. It's to be read, re-read and pondered upon. Fascinating! Robert
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Date: 10/15/2022 11:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for your mindful and insightful comment. It's so uplifting and so much appreciated. Blessings and regards my friend.

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