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August- 11- 2026

Deviants and Divine Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Silent One


 

Deviants and Divine

Men, collectively called Homo-sapiens,
Differ in breath and bone, thought and action.
No one wears another’s face or physiognomy 
Nor share cognitive or mental faculties in equal faction.

Cast in different molds, they stay different-
Some, mild and meek, to common rules lenient
Some, rebellious, questioning everything.
Can’t brand them notorious or wayward, but deviant.

Some seek the trodden path with lesser risk.
Others want to explore and stay adventurous.
Often unbound by rules and regulations,
Some tend to act unpredictably treacherous .

Contention and conformity walk side by side.
At times taking prominence one on the other
Contentious people are often instigators,
Who chain their glories to trifles that smother.

Deviants wish to engage in arguments that bite
Twist truth and justify wrong
Wear a disguise of virtue, but marred inside
Bind others with insistence, headstrong.

Some, rich in qualities of the head and heart-
People full of the milk of human kindness.
Call them the Divine who make the world richer.
They earn respect with honesty and uprightness.

People of clear thought and unclouded vision,
With actions aligned to conscience and words, sincere.
They withhold judgement until the truth is learned.
To integrity, as the guiding principle, they adhere.

Difference shouldn't be seen as man’s critical fracture
Those branded deviant may hold qualities benign,
From hideout, their niceties may come to fore one day.
So, be generous in your treatment of the Deviant and the Divine.
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Narain Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 11:18 AM
Great poem. Nice depicyion of diversity of human life.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 12:59 AM
Back with congrats, dear Valsa.
Guptar Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 12:04 PM
Back with congratulationsValsa on your deserved high win in this contest with a lovely poem depicting beautifully the diversity of mankind.
One Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:01 AM
Hello my friend, I like how this poem explores the sides of human nature, from conformity and rebellion to integrity and compassion. There’s a strong philosophical theme running through it, particularly in the idea that we are too quick to label people as “deviant” when difference does not necessarily mean wrongdoing. The closing message is thoughtful and humane. We should judge people less by the labels we give them and more by the qualities they reveal through their actions. Congrats
George Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 7:00 PM
Thank you so much dear Silent One for your appreciation and the placement given.🙏 It matters much to me. I am always of the opinion that we have no right to judge others as each man has a different background with varying experiences that determines his actions and reactions. Sending love.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 23, 2026 at 11:28 PM
As the Bible says. We must love all our neighbours.
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2026 at 12:27 AM
Great philosophical type writing, Valsa. In the end, we must love all mankind. Wise reflecting.
Guptar Avatar
August 17, 2026 at 8:43 AM
A lovely poem carved with depth of thought and much care with a truthful take on the diversity of mankind, Best wishes in the contest Valsa,
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 4:35 AM
Truth filled work you have penned, Valsa. So much goes into a person's makeup as a human. It is so sad that one little thing can be wrong with our body's workings or brain's working and that makes a person be that deviant. Like my grandson with Huntington's Disease which messes with a person's ability to control things like aggression, compulsion, and emotions. Thank you for sharing this one with us. 👏✍️ Sara K.
Godwin Avatar
August 14, 2026 at 5:00 AM
I cannot land on an approach for the vast of a theme and as great as you did with yours, I still feel it's a tough prompt. You poetically landed beautifully penned points, gave me much to think about and I think gave yourself to this fully (heck, you do that with all your writes) to cover the good, bad, ugly, pretty and possibilities in both the deviant and divine. I enjoyed this. CayCay
Ray Avatar
August 13, 2026 at 9:48 PM
A wonderful admixture of the potpourri of mankind and manunkind....truly a delight to meander and recognize the comings and goings in my own life. I love it when a poet's words suddenly become our own experience, as it unites us on a deeper level of commonality....the life force wind wandering in the forever of creation....thank you for letting me borrow the path, it is enlightening as it should be....
Hind Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 10:54 PM
wise words, Valsa <3
DiMino Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 8:29 AM
Indeed, takes all kinds. The part about judgement jumped out at me. I have been guilty of this~ difficult not to judge. Profound write.
Rodgers Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 7:20 AM
Dear Valsa, I loved how you laid out the two kinds of people without preaching. The arguers who push and twist, and to the steady ones who wait for facts, and you do it with calm observation, not judgment. What I like is the way you end, asking for generosity. It’s simple, clear, and kind, the exact tone this poem needs. Nice work. Valsa, keep writing like this, you make a fair, patient case for seeing people whole. Blessings, Daniel
Sharma  Avatar
August 11, 2026 at 2:45 AM
Awwn wow! My dear Valsa! The way you've described both the Deviants and the Divine as the creations of God ~ different and unique, following their own philosophies, while deviants are arguable and may support wrong ~ divines have their own light to seek the truth.. and I especially liked that ending how you've presented a fresh perspective that there can be qualities in abundance even in the deviants! We never know how they will come forth! Brilliant for the contest.. sending you light and best wishes 💫💫⭐⭐
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