Determination

My path is set, no turning back
My dream is big, so cut me some slack
The sheer brute force that drives my way
In this momentum I’m set to stay

In Metal I trusted all my life
It helped grow and to survive
A disciple of iron I thrive
Watch as I shift into over drive

The Naysayers will be revoked
Their words of poison just fade like smoke
I am no liar, I am no joke
Watch as my spirit I invoke

Determination is in mind
No one can stop me whilst I’m alive
I shall not bow or feel aligned
Not looking up to be declined

Determination inside my soul
My spirit and I feel so whole
My target locked and ready to go
To achieve my one and only GOAL
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Nelson Avatar
May 21, 2020 at 11:00 PM
Deter not mine! You made it rhyme well. Stay that way Peter Paul!
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