Detached Observer

Detached Observer



In Stillness
I 
Observe light
Green arura northern light
In space, in vision
A cloud of solar wind 
Dancing
vulnerably
Riding freely

My twin cell is on that ride

Am
A detached viewer
Become an extension of
breath
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November 30, 2021 at 9:15 PM
I love your poetry, very original with substance.
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