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Violet tulips Each petal flips, another Memory of you ©Drake J. Eszes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 9/11/2013 3:17:00 PM
Violet.... :-) Hope her memories are sweet Drake..
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Date: 9/11/2013 5:13:00 PM
I wouldn't know, to be honest. :) Hi & thank you so much, Eileen.
Date: 9/3/2013 8:52:00 PM
Nice one, Drake. Short and sweet, but with great imagery! Well done!....You might like my poem titled, "Love Bites", it also has a flower theme....Thank you so much for all of your visits. Every one of them is appreciated!
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Date: 9/3/2013 9:43:00 PM
Thanks very much, Kelly! :)
Date: 8/30/2013 12:59:00 PM
Great Haiku, very difficult to employ this format and get precisely what you want, but I believe you did it! good Job! MC
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Date: 8/30/2013 2:04:00 PM
Yes, it can be challenging when you're trying to get a point across in so few words. Thanks so much, MC!
Date: 8/8/2013 7:12:00 AM
So lovely. So concise. Love from Nola
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Date: 8/8/2013 7:14:00 AM
=D Thank you so much, Nola!
Date: 8/7/2013 8:38:00 AM
nice one here, i love violets, lovely read, have a blessed day, sueellen
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Date: 8/7/2013 9:18:00 AM
Hi & Thank you so much, Sue-Ellen!!! Yes, violets are quite pretty. =)
Date: 8/2/2013 10:35:00 AM
nice take on this had form loved the imagery in play also thanks for your kind comment on my limerick love to do them keep up the nice work and thanks again for stopping by
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Date: 8/2/2013 10:40:00 AM
Hi & you're welcome, Katherine! Very cool of you to stop on by! =)
Date: 7/26/2013 12:04:00 PM
Adding this to my list of favorites- 'nough said!!!
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Date: 7/26/2013 12:11:00 PM
=D WOO HOO! Thank you, Anne!!!!!
Date: 7/24/2013 5:30:00 AM
Very nice poem with strong imagery.
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Date: 7/24/2013 7:16:00 AM
Hi, Christine. Thanks very much for that.
Date: 7/23/2013 1:05:00 AM
each petal flips............. so,,,,,,,,,,,,,,beautiful
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Date: 7/23/2013 7:11:00 AM
=) Thank you so much, Ellie.
Date: 7/18/2013 11:35:00 PM
I believe this is the first haiku I've seen from you . I like it ;} Thank you for reading " Hollow Bones" I read my poems to my g- daughter because it teaches her how to read. So now and then she likes to input some ;}
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Date: 7/19/2013 5:28:00 AM
That's a beautiful thing. And thank you for that, Debbie. :)
Date: 7/17/2013 2:46:00 PM
LOVE. Such a nice treat to see you kick butt at a different form! (Faved)
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Date: 7/17/2013 2:59:00 PM
LOL you're totally adorable. Thank you so much, Heather. =D Butt-kicking forms EVERYDAY! You rock!
Date: 7/16/2013 12:42:00 PM
Very nice! Haiku is such an image-loaded form, and you've done a fine job with this one... Jack
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Date: 7/16/2013 2:02:00 PM
Yes, it really is! I'm very happy you liked this one! :) Thanks so much, Jack!
Date: 7/16/2013 1:24:00 AM
Excellent way to use that image. I like. Very.
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Date: 7/16/2013 7:21:00 AM
Thanks so much, Michae! :)
Date: 7/15/2013 5:19:00 PM
Text book Haiku... and great meaning. Very well done and true to form.... Jake
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Date: 7/15/2013 6:27:00 PM
Hi, John! :) Thanks so much! I'm glad I got this right! =D
Date: 7/13/2013 11:03:00 PM
You are such a sweet romantic guy! :) Lovely read, Drake. Lovely haiku.....sweet
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Date: 7/14/2013 12:57:00 AM
I try, Eileen. :) Thank you so much!!!
Date: 7/12/2013 12:01:00 PM
Excellent haiku enjoyed. How memory acts you have shown clearly with a very few words. Lovely done. Loved always, bl
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:19:00 PM
Yes, the power of memories and how we value them. Thanks so much, BL!
Date: 7/12/2013 8:13:00 AM
Have a great day Drake. Thanks for your kind comment Drake.
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Date: 7/12/2013 8:14:00 AM
It's Friday! I sure plan to! :) You have an awesome day too!
Date: 7/12/2013 5:55:00 AM
Great imagery in this haiku, Drake. I like... David
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Date: 7/12/2013 7:43:00 AM
Hey, David! :) Thanks so much!
Date: 7/12/2013 12:36:00 AM
Beautiful!! Accurate and perfect description of both love and flowers. Seems we were both in a "flower" writing mood yesterday. Thank you for stopping by "In Bloom"-- your encouragement is always appreciated!! Our writers group, who meet once a month, want us to write on the title "Lazy Daisy Days" (light verse) for next month-- Hmmm.. not too great on 'light verse', but will see what comes out.
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Date: 7/12/2013 7:40:00 AM
Hi, Kim! :) Yes, I noticed that! That was pretty coincidental! Or, was it?? lol But, thank you so much for that. "Lazy Daisy Days", interesting. Let me know how that turns out. I'd like to see the end result! =)
Date: 7/11/2013 11:48:00 PM
awesome haiku, Drake. The title goes so well with it. "petal" Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea! And, yes, "petal". =) Didn't even notice that...geez. Shame on me!
Date: 7/11/2013 10:25:00 PM
hello Drake, i know this detached feeling pretty well... deep, xox...PD
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:08:00 AM
Hola, Linda! As do I...thanks very much for stopping by here!
Date: 7/11/2013 9:31:00 PM
I love haikus and this is why! It takes a very special poet to put so much in so little. Bravo, Drake!
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Date: 7/12/2013 12:07:00 AM
I don't write Haikus too often, but today was a good day for one. :) Change things up a bit. Very awesome of you to stop by here, Toshia! =)
Date: 7/11/2013 5:01:00 PM
Beautiful! Betty
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Date: 7/11/2013 5:50:00 PM
Hey there, Betty!!! Thanks so much!
Date: 7/11/2013 4:24:00 PM
captured well Drake love it Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:46:00 PM
Hey there! Hi & thank you, Shadow!!! =D
Date: 7/11/2013 3:35:00 PM
I love flowers..and tulips are a definite beauty..Somehow this haiku reminds me of a dong i used to sing when i was very young ,about Tulips from Amstetdam.Everytime I sang it I used to close my eyes and imagine myself in s large field of tulips..Somehow I can relate to tulips and the memory even if in different ways from yours.I guess violet tulips represent royalty and if in gardens -its royalty,health and passion..I hope you ll find them all..not in a memory but for a lifetime.Lovely imagery
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Date: 7/11/2013 4:46:00 PM
Ha! It's ok. :) I knew what you meant. Your memory sounds very nice. I'm pretty sure I'll find them. :) Thanks so much for coming by here, Charmaine!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 7/11/2013 3:36:00 PM
Song..not domg : ) I must be sleepy..sorry
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