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'destiny's Vessel'

thoughts filter throughout me like a faucet divulging secrets lifting the barrier inducing augmentation a place where uncertainty flee embracing my feelings bring freedom while I remain the vessel of my fate 200720111400 Contest: Form or Free 3rd Place

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/26/2011 1:28:00 PM

so enjoyed the read of this Wilma, conveying the poetic experience, oh so well..!,

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/22/2011 12:41:00 PM

Sometimes I wonder where my "vessel" is headed, Wilma. Some barriers seem difficult to lift, but I got a positive, upbeat feeling from this wonderful etheree. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm headed to the chiropractor now. Really appreciate hearing from you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 7/22/2011 4:17:00 AM

Very articulate and poetic, Wilma. I like the Etheree form and it works well here. Love, Robert.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/21/2011 1:40:00 PM

undulating, wilms..miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!

James Fraser

Date: 7/21/2011 1:31:00 PM

I know what you mean Wilma by "the vessel of my fate" terrific words. Regarding me, I have a lot on my mind presently, hence not being on the Soup as much as I usually am. Thank you kindly for stopping by - mega hugs for you :)

James Fraser

Date: 7/21/2011 1:31:00 PM

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/21/2011 10:20:00 AM

This sure is an inspiring read, missy :D love how you say that you are the "vessel of my fate" so true indeed :D Wonderful etheree :D mwahugs

John Freeman

Date: 7/21/2011 9:25:00 AM

Wilma, Beautiful, Good to see you near the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2011 6:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2011 6:27:00 AM

Congrats Wilma on an excellent win with this fantastic poetry.. it is one of my favs from first reading.. special intensity throughout .. a winner just like u my friend..luv..

John Freeman

Date: 7/21/2011 6:08:00 AM

"the vessel of my fate" unfortunately it is fact, one must live in the vessel of whatever state. Cool ideal, Wilma. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/20/2011 10:02:00 PM

that last line is spectacular, WIlma: while I remain the vessel of my fate. WAs this for any contest? Luv ya, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/20/2011 8:11:00 PM

well well! Wilma, i love the feeling your poems bring.. hope you are well. as for me just wondering ,, take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/20/2011 3:53:00 PM

wow.. wow.. and wow again Wilma.. have to make this one a fav.. to read over and over again.. words of beauty..passion..insight.. emotion.. luv the thoughts filtering like a faucet.. oh so unique .. amazing my friend.. luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 7/20/2011 2:33:00 PM

ANother excelllent piece my dear Wilma... well done... I love your thought proccess here....love Michael

Jack Horne

Date: 7/20/2011 8:35:00 AM

Wow, this is excellent, Wilma. I love the words you've chosen. And I love seeing people's native languages too. lfde to you too, my friend - you always make me smile : )

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/20/2011 6:54:00 AM

I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and amazing piece Wilma. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol