Wilma Neels Poet Etheree

'destiny's Vessel'

thoughts
filter
throughout me
like a faucet
divulging secrets 
lifting the barrier
inducing augmentation
a place where uncertainty flee
embracing my feelings bring freedom
while I remain the vessel of my fate


200720111400



Contest: Form or Free
3rd Place

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Joe Maverick July 26, 2011 at 1:28 PM so enjoyed the read of this Wilma, conveying the poetic experience, oh so well..!,

Carolyn Devonshire July 22, 2011 at 12:41 PM Sometimes I wonder where my "vessel" is headed, Wilma. Some barriers seem difficult to lift, but I got a positive, upbeat feeling from this wonderful etheree. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm headed to the chiropractor now. Really appreciate hearing from you, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Zzzzz Zzzzz July 22, 2011 at 4:17 AM Very articulate and poetic, Wilma. I like the Etheree form and it works well here. Love, Robert.

Nette Onclaud July 21, 2011 at 1:40 PM undulating, wilms..miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs!

James Fraser July 21, 2011 at 1:31 PM I know what you mean Wilma by "the vessel of my fate" terrific words. Regarding me, I have a lot on my mind presently, hence not being on the Soup as much as I usually am. Thank you kindly for stopping by - mega hugs for you :)

James Fraser July 21, 2011 at 1:31 PM I know what you mean Wilma by "the vessel of my fate" terrific words. Regarding me, I have a lot on my mind presently, hence not being on the Soup as much as I usually am. Thank you kindly for stopping by - mega hugs for you :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K. July 21, 2011 at 10:20 AM This sure is an inspiring read, missy :D love how you say that you are the "vessel of my fate" so true indeed :D Wonderful etheree :D mwahugs

John Freeman July 21, 2011 at 9:25 AM Wilma, Beautiful, Good to see you near the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown July 21, 2011 at 6:28 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Wilma. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 21, 2011 at 6:27 AM Congrats Wilma on an excellent win with this fantastic poetry.. it is one of my favs from first reading.. special intensity throughout .. a winner just like u my friend..luv..

John Freeman July 21, 2011 at 6:08 AM "the vessel of my fate" unfortunately it is fact, one must live in the vessel of whatever state. Cool ideal, Wilma. Agape, Moses

Andrea Dietrich July 20, 2011 at 10:02 PM that last line is spectacular, WIlma: while I remain the vessel of my fate. WAs this for any contest? Luv ya, Andrea

Poet Destroyer A July 20, 2011 at 8:11 PM well well! Wilma, i love the feeling your poems bring.. hope you are well. as for me just wondering ,, take care,..p.d.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 20, 2011 at 3:53 PM wow.. wow.. and wow again Wilma.. have to make this one a fav.. to read over and over again.. words of beauty..passion..insight.. emotion.. luv the thoughts filtering like a faucet.. oh so unique .. amazing my friend.. luv..

Michael J. Falotico July 20, 2011 at 2:33 PM ANother excelllent piece my dear Wilma... well done... I love your thought proccess here....love Michael

Jack Horne July 20, 2011 at 8:35 AM Wow, this is excellent, Wilma. I love the words you've chosen. And I love seeing people's native languages too. lfde to you too, my friend - you always make me smile : )

Carol Sunshine Brown July 20, 2011 at 6:54 AM I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and amazing piece Wilma. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol