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'destiny's Vessel'

thoughts
filter
throughout me
like a faucet
divulging secrets 
lifting the barrier
inducing augmentation
a place where uncertainty flee
embracing my feelings bring freedom
while I remain the vessel of my fate


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Contest: Form or Free
3rd Place

Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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Joe Maverick Date: 7/26/2011 1:28:00 PM so enjoyed the read of this Wilma, conveying the poetic experience, oh so well..!, Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 7/22/2011 12:41:00 PM Sometimes I wonder where my "vessel" is headed, Wilma. Some barriers seem difficult to lift, but I got a positive, upbeat feeling from this wonderful etheree. Thanks for reading my poem. I'm headed to the chiropractor now. Really appreciate hearing from you, my friend. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Zzzzz Zzzzz Date: 7/22/2011 4:17:00 AM Very articulate and poetic, Wilma. I like the Etheree form and it works well here. Love, Robert. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 7/21/2011 1:40:00 PM undulating, wilms..miles of congrats on a well deserved award! :)huggs! Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/21/2011 1:31:00 PM I know what you mean Wilma by "the vessel of my fate" terrific words. Regarding me, I have a lot on my mind presently, hence not being on the Soup as much as I usually am. Thank you kindly for stopping by - mega hugs for you :) Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 7/21/2011 1:31:00 PM I know what you mean Wilma by "the vessel of my fate" terrific words. Regarding me, I have a lot on my mind presently, hence not being on the Soup as much as I usually am. Thank you kindly for stopping by - mega hugs for you :) Login to Reply

Kabuteng P.Ink K. Date: 7/21/2011 10:20:00 AM This sure is an inspiring read, missy :D love how you say that you are the "vessel of my fate" so true indeed :D Wonderful etheree :D mwahugs Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/21/2011 9:25:00 AM Wilma, Beautiful, Good to see you near the top spot. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/21/2011 6:28:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Wilma. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/21/2011 6:27:00 AM Congrats Wilma on an excellent win with this fantastic poetry.. it is one of my favs from first reading.. special intensity throughout .. a winner just like u my friend..luv.. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 7/21/2011 6:08:00 AM "the vessel of my fate" unfortunately it is fact, one must live in the vessel of whatever state. Cool ideal, Wilma. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/20/2011 10:02:00 PM that last line is spectacular, WIlma: while I remain the vessel of my fate. WAs this for any contest? Luv ya, Andrea Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/20/2011 8:11:00 PM well well! Wilma, i love the feeling your poems bring.. hope you are well. as for me just wondering ,, take care,..p.d. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 7/20/2011 3:53:00 PM wow.. wow.. and wow again Wilma.. have to make this one a fav.. to read over and over again.. words of beauty..passion..insight.. emotion.. luv the thoughts filtering like a faucet.. oh so unique .. amazing my friend.. luv.. Login to Reply

Michael J. Falotico Date: 7/20/2011 2:33:00 PM ANother excelllent piece my dear Wilma... well done... I love your thought proccess here....love Michael Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 7/20/2011 8:35:00 AM Wow, this is excellent, Wilma. I love the words you've chosen. And I love seeing people's native languages too. lfde to you too, my friend - you always make me smile : ) Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 7/20/2011 6:54:00 AM I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and amazing piece Wilma. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol Login to Reply