Destiny when laments
Life’s script is pre-writ
And Fate looms large upon it,
Resigned, we just quit,
React to be circumspect,
Destiny wishes, we act.
So let down by men
Fate wails, what use free will then?
O strive best ye can,
It is no use to react,
Act, force Fate change fated facts.
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Tanka |06.04.2018 revised in Aug 2023|
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