Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Destiny Or Choices

Destiny or Choices Contest
Sponsor: Nayda Ivette Negron

My fate resides within my destination
Am I to make my own decisions or am I just God’s creation?
Karma drags me beneath my delicate fortune 
Am I just a simple being or someone important?

Eventually my future will come and pass on. Whenever that happens I will realize my purpose will shine through the universe so bright Venus will capture my essence. Choosing to be extraordinary will allow my providence to survive. I prefer options inside my circumstances. I believe my decree lays next to my choices and my choices lay next to my reality. Science and destiny co-exist. I have proof of that. I live in the present and will die eventually. My choices are contingent upon my beliefs and my beliefs are contingent upon the understanding of chances taken. I feel freedom to live how I wish, yet I anticipate the hereafter. Reasoning can seem smooth yet selections can seem complicated. This I know. I hold my fate in my heart and I carry my decisions in my intellect. These two things keep me alive and staying alive will bring me to a superb life after death.

Am I to make my own decisions or am I just God’s creation?
I think sincere reasoning causes future liberation
Am I just a simple being or someone important?
I do wish to be prosperous at peace and concordant.

My fate resides within my destination
I choose to be righteous with dedication
More blessed life lessons free of contortion
Karma drags me beneath my delicate fortune


Date Written: April 18, 2016

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Bl Devnath April 20, 2016 at 3:15 PM Congrats on your great win my lovely frind. Loved always, bl

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 19, 2016 at 10:23 PM Congrats on ur awesome win Laura.. Beautiful Scars April 20, 2016 at 8:19 AM thank you Dr. Upma :)-luloo

Brian Mcclain April 19, 2016 at 9:37 PM Hi Laura, Congrats on your contest win with this well-crafted and thought-provoking write. Cheers, Brian Beautiful Scars April 20, 2016 at 8:18 AM Thank you Brian..:)-luloo

Sandra Haight April 19, 2016 at 3:24 PM Beautifully written, Laura, and so full of wisdom and deep thoughts on this theme. Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra Beautiful Scars April 19, 2016 at 4:20 PM thank you Sandra :)-luloo

Wendy Rycroft April 19, 2016 at 3:06 PM fab great poem x congrats Beautiful Scars April 19, 2016 at 4:19 PM thank you Wendy :)-luloo

Vladislav Raven April 19, 2016 at 2:58 PM Hi Luloo, Congratulations on your win in the contest. An excellent write as always. A deep look into the question "Destiny Or Choices." This write holds the attention from start to finish, it actually made me ask myself some questions. A seven for this creative write. Hugs....Mike. XX Beautiful Scars April 19, 2016 at 4:19 PM awww thanks Mike! :)-luloo

Bl Devnath April 19, 2016 at 10:05 AM Excellent poem read from you. i agree with you regarding destiny where karma is the way to build better. Beautifully done. Best of luck. Loved always, bl Beautiful Scars April 19, 2016 at 1:05 PM thank you BL..:)-luloo