Vladislav Raven Poet Free verse

Destiny Or Choice - Repost

Destiny shines when choice is made,
The two are one within Love's shade.
Does destiny make our choices true?
Taking control,choice with you,
Living our choices, not afraid.

For Destiny is not betrayed,
The facts before us they are layed,
Destiny i do follow through,
Destiny Shines.

Destiny has called, i have stayed,
Many wrong choices i have made,
Yet destiny has seen me through,
Destiny i believe in you.
Destiny, choice, at mind's door layed,
Destiny shines.

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Vladislav Raven September 1, 2019 at 4:40 PM I would like to thank all those who drop by this piece, it is much appreciated....Mike.

Jennifer Proxenos August 31, 2019 at 1:59 PM Destiny - some things are just made to be, and so is your breath taking write - 'Yet Destiny has seen me through' - hope Destiny always shines for you! Hugs, Jennifer. Vladislav Raven September 1, 2019 at 4:33 PM Hi Jennifer, I thank you for your kind words. Thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I shall always follow destiny, wherever she may lead me. This one was written for a contest in the soup, a while back. Have a wondeful Monday, when it comes, Hugs....Mike. XX

Caren Krutsinger August 29, 2019 at 9:19 PM "Destiny i believe in you." - this is a gorgeous line, darling poem! Vladislav Raven September 1, 2019 at 4:23 PM Hi Caren, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Destiny has always led me right, up yo date, so I shall always follow my destiny. This one was written, I a sure now, for a contest on the soup, a while back. Have a wonderful Monday, when it comes. Hugs....Mike. XX

Connie Marcum Wong August 29, 2019 at 7:54 PM I definitely believe in destiny. My life has been built upon it. I agree with your golden words! Lovely Mike! : ) xxoo Vladislav Raven September 1, 2019 at 4:08 PM Hi Connie, thank you so much for your words. Sorry I am late in getting back to you. Thank you for dropping by and the comment, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. As I was saying to Pashang, if mind serves, this one was written for a contest on Poetry Soup. Have a wonderful Monday when it comes. Hugs....Mike. XX

Pashang Salehi August 29, 2019 at 7:47 PM Some things are destined to be great, and Mike, you are one of them... Vladislav Raven September 1, 2019 at 3:54 PM Why, thank you Pashang, that is a very nice thing to say. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. I think this one was written for a contest here on THE Soup. Have a wonderful Monday, when it comes. Hugs....Mike. XX