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Destiny - C

Fate's fickle fingers
frequently foist frustration
and fortune 'fore us

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(C) John C Michaels, 2014

futurealliteration

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Lisa Ricci

March 11, 2017 at 8:09 AM

Good Morning John. May fate and fortune for the goodness of light and life reveal themselves to one and all. Well done and expressed.

John Michaels

March 11, 2017 at 10:39 AM

Good fortune to you too, Lisa! Thank you for your kind comments!

Poet Destroyer A

August 28, 2014 at 2:16 PM

Okay, this happens to be one of my favorite forms. Alliteration. Love the mix, destiny in a box... Love Linda

John Michaels

February 12, 2017 at 4:52 AM

Thanks so much, Linda. Glad you liked it!

Robert Lindley

August 19, 2014 at 6:40 PM

An amazing write! Fickle Finger of Fate runs the gamete often.

John Michaels

February 12, 2017 at 4:49 AM

Thank you, Richard. I appreciate your kind comments.

Andrea Dietrich

July 10, 2014 at 9:17 PM

I only like when they dish out fortune, but sadly it seems more of the middle line!!! Great alliteration.

John Michaels

February 12, 2017 at 4:48 AM

Sadly, I think you're right. But hopefully the last line will come our way soon. Thanks for your comments (apologies for the delay).

Pandita Sietesantos

July 10, 2014 at 6:54 AM

John, I am blown away - this is a masterpiece! I don't think I can top this one, my friend! It is perfect in my books! Fireworks going off!!!!!

John Michaels

July 10, 2014 at 8:14 AM

Wow! Thanks so much for the glowing remarks! I couldn't decide whether to submit this one, or my other Destiny haiku, for the competition... maybe I made the wrong choice :(

Destiny - C

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