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Destiny and Soul

Destiny and Soul

" Come all you awaiting for incarnation souls, this is
your destiny, speaking.

Come and pick a vessel of your choice to embark on
for 
the unique experience on the challenging ocean of life.

Come, we have vessels of all sizes:
Those built for exciting adventures
and 
those built just for pleasure.

Vessels for long trips are available, and the same 
for short crossings.

One thing, though, I would like to make clear to you from
the beginning 
so as
no confusion to be created in the core of your very soul:
Once you have chosen, among all these vessels that exist
and you get aboard, and are to sail,
your freedom is limited immediately and, at times, is non-existent 
for the rudder of your vessel, automatically, would pass into 
the hands of your creator and God, who towards your final 
destination will guide. 

A destination that would be revealed to you before the moment you
take your final decision,
but 
from the moment you choose, and you embark,
no more choices are allowed.

Now that all things are made clear to you, let each soul embark on
her own chosen vessel. 

Remember, though, that if something goes wrong, you cannot put
on God the blame, 
for the choice has been given to you to pick the
life you desired to live."

That was the way destiny spoke to the anxiously awaiting
For incarnation souls, 
And 
They all rushed forward, immediately, and made their choices.







© Demetrios Trifiatis
     30 January 2019
© Demetrios Trifiatis
     30 January 2019

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Robertina B. February 2, 2019 at 6:01 PM Your creativity shines with your Amazing write, Demetrios.. So inspirational and really touches the soul.. Wonderful my friend!! Blessings to you.. Demetrios Trifiatis February 3, 2019 at 11:12 AM So gracious of you dearest, Robertina! Thank you!

Harry Horsman January 30, 2019 at 8:24 AM Demetrios, the greatest give an elder can give, is to pass on his knowledge of life,,,alas if only the youth would listen,,or even read wonderful poetry like yours. Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2019 at 9:54 AM Harry, my friend you so right, unfortunately though, the young prefer to " Google it" . To morrow I will write something about it! Thank you so much for your kind visit!

Vijay Pandit January 30, 2019 at 7:09 AM A magnificent poem my friend..so much depth in your message, Demetrios. Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2019 at 9:51 AM I thank you for your appreciation my friend, Vijay! God bless you!

Anne-Lise Andresen January 30, 2019 at 6:30 AM - Many thanks for these words of wisdom, my friend ... the art of leading oneself, right ... we are responsible for our own lives and deeds :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2019 at 6:55 AM Thank you for your precious comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx

Heidi Sands January 30, 2019 at 6:22 AM I agree very thought provoking and well written. Beautiful flower too ! Thanks for sharing :) Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2019 at 6:54 AM Good to see you again dear, Heidi! Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

Tom Cunningham January 30, 2019 at 3:05 AM Very thought provoking verse Demetrios. Since time began we have been told to prepare ourselves for the onward journey but many have made the wrong choice and when the time comes will find themselves without a ticket. They have only themselves to blame. Tom. Demetrios Trifiatis January 30, 2019 at 3:34 AM We, the older people, ought to write on things like that so as to help the younger ones discern the truths of life. Thank you for your precikus comment my good friend, Tom. Thank you!