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" Come all you awaiting for incarnation souls this is your destiny speaking. Come and pick a vessel of your choice to embark on for the unique experience on the challenging ocean of life. Come we have vessels of all sizes: Those build for exciting adventures and those built just for pleasure. Vessels for long trips also are available, and the same for short crossings. One thing though I would like to make clear to you from the beginning so as no confusion to be created in the core of your very soul: Once your vessel you have chosen, among all these vessels that exist and you get aboard, and ready are to sail, your freedom is limited immediately and, at times is non-existent for the rudder of your vessel automatically would pass into the hands of your creator and God who towards your final destination will guide. A destination that would be revealed to you before the moment you take your final decision but from the moment you choose, and you embark no more choices are allowed. Now that all things are made clear to you, let each soul embark on her own chosen vessel. Remember, though, that if something goes wrong, you cannot put on God the blame for the choice has been given to you to pick the life you desired to live." That was the way destiny spoke to the anxiously awaiting for incarnation souls And They all immediately rushed forward and made their choice. © Demetrios Trifiatis 30 January 2019

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Date: 2/2/2019 6:01:00 PM
Your creativity shines with your Amazing write, Demetrios.. So inspirational and really touches the soul.. Wonderful my friend!! Blessings to you..
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Date: 2/3/2019 11:12:00 AM
So gracious of you dearest, Robertina! Thank you!
Date: 1/30/2019 8:24:00 AM
Demetrios, the greatest give an elder can give, is to pass on his knowledge of life,,,alas if only the youth would listen,,or even read wonderful poetry like yours.
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Date: 1/30/2019 9:54:00 AM
Harry, my friend you so right, unfortunately though, the young prefer to " Google it" . To morrow I will write something about it! Thank you so much for your kind visit!
Date: 1/30/2019 7:09:00 AM
A magnificent poem my friend..so much depth in your message, Demetrios.
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Date: 1/30/2019 9:51:00 AM
I thank you for your appreciation my friend, Vijay! God bless you!
Date: 1/30/2019 6:30:00 AM
- Many thanks for these words of wisdom, my friend ... the art of leading oneself, right ... we are responsible for our own lives and deeds :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:55:00 AM
Thank you for your precious comment dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
Date: 1/30/2019 6:22:00 AM
I agree very thought provoking and well written. Beautiful flower too ! Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 1/30/2019 6:54:00 AM
Good to see you again dear, Heidi! Thank you so much for your lovely comment!
Date: 1/30/2019 3:05:00 AM
Very thought provoking verse Demetrios. Since time began we have been told to prepare ourselves for the onward journey but many have made the wrong choice and when the time comes will find themselves without a ticket. They have only themselves to blame. Tom.
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Date: 1/30/2019 3:34:00 AM
We, the older people, ought to write on things like that so as to help the younger ones discern the truths of life. Thank you for your precikus comment my good friend, Tom. Thank you!

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