CayCay Godwin Poet Verse

Destiny

divine destiny
 
decided before birth

delivered on life’s course

determines life on earth

designates direction

or

doubts after choices 

doodled guilt maybes

disturbed self-image 

desires need to believe

destiny caused everything

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Kim Merryman September 1, 2016 at 7:50 PM CayCay, this was a creative topic and you did a great job of depicting it. Congrats on your win! Blessings!

Paul Callus September 1, 2016 at 6:02 PM You offer us food for thought, CayCay:) I believe that we have the power to alter destiny's course. Congratulations on your fine win! Regards // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen September 1, 2016 at 4:55 AM - CayCay congratulations on your placement in the contest, with this beautiful write :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Connie Marcum Wong September 1, 2016 at 12:45 AM Your Pleiades was so unique and creative CayCay. I really enjoyed it, congratulations on your win! ; )

Viv Wigley September 1, 2016 at 12:37 AM Congrats, CayCay, it must have been fate, Viv x

Beautiful Scars August 31, 2016 at 8:03 PM CayCay, very wise lovely lady :) congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Andrea Dietrich August 30, 2016 at 3:07 PM A most interesting word you chose there, Caycay. YOu are Destiny's child!!

Probir Gupta August 30, 2016 at 5:22 AM Psychologically very interesting ... very well written .... CayCay Godwin August 30, 2016 at 11:23 AM Wouldn't the validity of destiny make a good debate - I think I could argue either side. Thank you, Probir and go in a good way ... CayCay

Eve Roper August 29, 2016 at 9:36 PM Good one, CayCay, I like it Hugs Eve CayCay Godwin August 30, 2016 at 11:22 AM Hi, Eve - not as unique as DRAGONS, but I'm glad you like it and, as always, appreciate your comments. All the best ... CayCay

Arthur Vaso August 29, 2016 at 8:33 PM Wow, I dont know whether to be happy or sad, this is one of thosee poems makes you contemplate! For that I love it! CayCay Godwin August 29, 2016 at 8:45 PM Love your response. Thank you much, Arthur. Contemplate on ... CayCay