Destiny

A despised beauty
 Who once belonged to the ground
    Now soaring with wings

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David Meade

Date: 10/29/2014 10:49:00 PM

Just found your poem, I love the transformation and the freedom of flight --may all your dream take flight and sour.

Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/30/2014 12:42:00 PM

Thank you so much David ^^

Joseph May

Date: 10/18/2014 5:43:00 AM

Wonderful haiku Doris....enjoyed

Doris Jamoner
Date: 10/21/2014 2:50:00 PM

Thank you

Robin Davis

Date: 8/29/2014 8:39:00 AM

Doris Creative and full of imagery that allows the reader to see this transformation in their mind and picture the pretty butterfly free and in flight. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Clearer Path poem.

Doris Jamoner
Date: 8/29/2014 3:51:00 PM

Thanks for that wonderful comment Robin. ^^

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 7/2/2014 9:04:00 AM

Congratulations, Doris,super image of the caterpillar/butterfly transformation. Deserving of the win. PS thanks for the comment on my --destiny--too.

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/21/2014 5:13:00 PM

Thanks : )

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2014 7:07:00 PM

hey, this is pretty neat!! Congrats in the contest too.

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/21/2014 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/1/2014 6:18:00 PM

Sweet, I enjoyed this one, Grats on your win, :)

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/4/2014 3:29:00 PM

Thank you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 1:55:00 AM

Nice flight of imagination, very creative, Doris, congrats on the win

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/1/2014 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/30/2014 7:09:00 PM

Well, this is about as creative as it gets...congrats. BG

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/1/2014 11:38:00 AM

Thank you Barbara. : )

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 4:24:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Doris!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/1/2014 11:39:00 AM

Thanks Arlene.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:16:00 PM

Hi Doris, a huge congratulations to you, my friend, for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/1/2014 11:40:00 AM

Thanks Pandita. : )

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2014 3:06:00 PM

Hi Doris....back again, this time to congratulate you on a deserved win. // paul

Doris Jamoner
Date: 7/1/2014 11:41:00 AM

Thanks for the greeting and for your help as well : )

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 10:48:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend, Doris for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/30/2014 1:04:00 PM

Thank you Leonora. I really enjoyed it : )

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/27/2014 11:18:00 AM

It seems to be helpless where we all are here. Actually all ways are open to help own self, just we need to feel that. It's beautiful indeed. Nice message. Loved always, bl

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/29/2014 1:37:00 PM

Thank you : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/24/2014 11:41:00 AM

Wonderful expressive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/25/2014 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Sara!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 6/19/2014 10:43:00 PM

Very very beautiful!!

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/22/2014 9:39:00 AM

Thanks arthur : )

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 3:05:00 PM

thank for the thanks...PD

Paul Callus

Date: 6/14/2014 5:33:00 AM

Hi Doris! Well expressed haiku. Like the fairytale ending...that's why we must not lose hope or underrate ourselves...another case of self-belief. // paul

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/18/2014 5:06:00 PM

Thank you Paul. : )

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 6/10/2014 11:41:00 AM

The imagery in this Haiku is incredible...enjoyed reading! If for a contest, this is a true winner..good luck! Look forward to you posting more! Keep me posted.

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/18/2014 5:07:00 PM

Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 9:19:00 AM

Doris,, well done on the haiku. Enjoyed the image. LINDA

Doris Jamoner
Date: 6/18/2014 5:08:00 PM

Thank you