Destiny

A despised beauty
 Who once belonged to the ground
    Now soaring with wings

beautybutterflyhaiku

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David Meade

October 29, 2014 at 10:49 PM

Just found your poem, I love the transformation and the freedom of flight --may all your dream take flight and sour.

Doris Jamoner

October 30, 2014 at 12:42 PM

Thank you so much David ^^

Joseph May

October 18, 2014 at 5:43 AM

Wonderful haiku Doris....enjoyed

Doris Jamoner

October 21, 2014 at 2:50 PM

Thank you

Robin Davis

August 29, 2014 at 8:39 AM

Doris Creative and full of imagery that allows the reader to see this transformation in their mind and picture the pretty butterfly free and in flight. Thank you for the sweet comment on my Clearer Path poem.

Doris Jamoner

August 29, 2014 at 3:51 PM

Thanks for that wonderful comment Robin. ^^

Reason A. Poteet

July 2, 2014 at 9:04 AM

Congratulations, Doris,super image of the caterpillar/butterfly transformation. Deserving of the win. PS thanks for the comment on my --destiny--too.

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:13 PM

Thanks : )

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2014 at 7:07 PM

hey, this is pretty neat!! Congrats in the contest too.

Doris Jamoner

July 21, 2014 at 5:13 PM

Thanks Andrea.

Casarah Nance

July 1, 2014 at 6:18 PM

Sweet, I enjoyed this one, Grats on your win, :)

Doris Jamoner

July 4, 2014 at 3:29 PM

Thank you.

Dr.Ram Mehta

July 1, 2014 at 1:55 AM

Nice flight of imagination, very creative, Doris, congrats on the win

Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:38 AM

Thank you Dr. Ram

Barbara Gorelick

June 30, 2014 at 7:09 PM

Well, this is about as creative as it gets...congrats. BG

Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:38 AM

Thank you Barbara. : )

Arlene Smith

June 30, 2014 at 4:24 PM

Congrats on a great win, Doris!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:39 AM

Thanks Arlene.

Pandita Sietesantos

June 30, 2014 at 4:16 PM

Hi Doris, a huge congratulations to you, my friend, for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita

Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:40 AM

Thanks Pandita. : )

Paul Callus

June 30, 2014 at 3:06 PM

Hi Doris....back again, this time to congratulate you on a deserved win. // paul

Doris Jamoner

July 1, 2014 at 11:41 AM

Thanks for the greeting and for your help as well : )

Len Gasun

June 30, 2014 at 10:48 AM

Congratulations my dear friend, Doris for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Doris Jamoner

June 30, 2014 at 1:04 PM

Thank you Leonora. I really enjoyed it : )

Bl Devnath

June 27, 2014 at 11:18 AM

It seems to be helpless where we all are here. Actually all ways are open to help own self, just we need to feel that. It's beautiful indeed. Nice message. Loved always, bl

Doris Jamoner

June 29, 2014 at 1:37 PM

Thank you : )

Sara Kendrick

June 24, 2014 at 11:41 AM

Wonderful expressive work..Enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Doris Jamoner

June 25, 2014 at 11:32 AM

Thank you Sara!

Arthur Vaso

June 19, 2014 at 10:43 PM

Very very beautiful!!

Doris Jamoner

June 22, 2014 at 9:39 AM

Thanks arthur : )

Poet Destroyer A

June 19, 2014 at 3:05 PM

thank for the thanks...PD

Paul Callus

June 14, 2014 at 5:33 AM

Hi Doris! Well expressed haiku. Like the fairytale ending...that's why we must not lose hope or underrate ourselves...another case of self-belief. // paul

Doris Jamoner

June 18, 2014 at 5:06 PM

Thank you Paul. : )

Pace Ink-U-Script

June 10, 2014 at 11:41 AM

The imagery in this Haiku is incredible...enjoyed reading! If for a contest, this is a true winner..good luck! Look forward to you posting more! Keep me posted.

Doris Jamoner

June 18, 2014 at 5:07 PM

Thank you