Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Haiku

Destiny

We are “underlings”
To the destiny itself
Rather than to stars.

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Based on Macbeth by Shakespeare
June 6, 2014
Form : Haiku
Dr. Ram Mehta
First Place Win
Contest: Destiny by Leonara Ghalinta

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Skat A May 23, 2015 at 11:09 AM AWESOME

John Michaels July 10, 2014 at 4:33 AM Congrats on your win!

Estela Canama July 2, 2014 at 9:44 AM Dr.Ram, Congrats! You really did your best on your poem-Destiny... God bless!

James Fraser July 1, 2014 at 1:53 PM In the grand scheme of things, we are indeed 'underlings' Dr. Ram. Many congratulations on your win, James :)

Doris Jamoner July 1, 2014 at 11:49 AM Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris

Jagjot Kaur July 1, 2014 at 6:42 AM Hi Dr. Ram, Congrats on your win. Thanks, Jagjot

Theresa Stephens July 1, 2014 at 5:50 AM Hi Doctor Ram, Congrats on your win and for your thought provoking haiku. All the best, Theresa xx

Barbara Gorelick June 30, 2014 at 7:17 PM You are so right! Congrats to you DR. BG

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser June 30, 2014 at 5:46 PM Nice.. Congratulations..:)

Pandita Sietesantos June 30, 2014 at 4:45 PM Hi Dr. Ram, a huge congratulations to you, for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita

Arlene Smith June 30, 2014 at 4:38 PM Congrats on a top win, Dr. Mehta! Hugs.. Arlene

Paul Callus June 30, 2014 at 3:15 PM Well reasoned Dr! Quite a learned touch. Congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Len Gasun June 30, 2014 at 11:02 AM Congratulations my dear friend, Dr. Ram for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora Dr.Ram Mehta July 1, 2014 at 5:19 AM Thanks, Leo, for the appreciation, love and hugs

John Michaels June 20, 2014 at 5:24 AM A really interesting and poetic take on the theme of Destiny... all the best!

Verlena S. Walker June 13, 2014 at 9:57 PM Beautiful Dr. Ram. I have enjoyed my visit. Verlena

Poet Destroyer A June 9, 2014 at 9:15 AM Awesome haiku...PD

Jack Horne June 7, 2014 at 4:28 PM clever write indeed

James Fraser June 7, 2014 at 3:14 PM That we are Dr. Ram <*> thank you kindly for your appreciative comment on my 'Destiny' poem, James......

... Gigno June 7, 2014 at 2:46 PM !!!

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2014 at 9:57 AM GREAT take on this contest idea, Dr. Ram!!!

Mel Merrill June 7, 2014 at 3:22 AM Dr. Ram, a great Haiku! I know Macbeth very well, so this was a fun read...Mel :)