Destiny

Grass seed 'neath concrete Bursts through beckoning pathways, Where was meant to be.

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Skat A

Date: 5/26/2015 5:02:00 PM

Arlene, nice to know, enjoyed

John Michaels

Date: 7/10/2014 4:20:00 AM

Great Haiku on multiple levels! The sense of freedom and expression of nature laid over the "so where does that leave us...?" question. Congrats on a well-deserved win!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/10/2014 6:15:00 AM

Thank you, John!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2014 9:27:00 AM

So glad to see you get a number one win with this one, Arlene. WAY to GO!

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/4/2014 9:44:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Doris Jamoner

Date: 7/1/2014 11:50:00 AM

Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/1/2014 12:01:00 PM

Thank you so much, Doris.. Hugs.. Arlene

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 7/1/2014 8:19:00 AM

talk about determination - you've said it all. Congratulations on a fine haiku, Arlene. The win is just window dressing.

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/1/2014 9:30:00 AM

Thank you so much, Reason, my friend! I agree about the win. I love a friendly competition, but I write and read because I love it and wish to improve.. Hugs.. Arlene

Theresa Stephens

Date: 7/1/2014 3:36:00 AM

Hi Arlene, Congrats on your win. Grass deserves to flourish where it wilt. Good haiku theme. Regards Theresa xx

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/1/2014 9:27:00 AM

Thank you so much, Theresa! I have difficulty with this form, but practicing.. Hugs.. Arlene

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/1/2014 3:11:00 AM

Even in impossible places things happens..:) as like a grass growing in cemented path..:)kudos my friend ..:)

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/1/2014 9:26:00 AM

Yes indeed, Olive, my friend! Thank you so much.. Hugs.. Arlene

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 2:18:00 AM

A beautiful thought nicely conveyed through images, Arlene. congrats

Arlene Smith
Date: 7/1/2014 9:23:00 AM

Thank you so much, Dr. Mehta!.. Hugs.. Arlene

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 6/30/2014 7:19:00 PM

Glad to see your success in this contest. Good for you! BG

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/30/2014 9:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Barbara! Hugs.. Arlene

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:49:00 PM

Hi Arlene, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your TOP win which you so richly deserve! Warmest regards. Pandita

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/30/2014 9:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Pandita.. Hugs.. Arlene

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend, Arlene for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/30/2014 12:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Leonora, my friend.. Love and hugs to you!.. Arlene

John Posey

Date: 6/14/2014 12:21:00 PM

Great writing!! I realize that destiny and fate are synonyms. but destiny is, in my mind, profoundly positive where fate presents a negative overtone. I realize the syllable count would not qualify this as a haiku, but would not the entire tone of the poetic theme change from positive to negative by switching from destiny to fate. You really nailed this one..... Love ya ... Jake.

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/18/2014 9:58:00 AM

I never thought of it that way, but I agree.. Thanks my friend.. Hugs. Arlene..

Paul Callus

Date: 6/11/2014 6:46:00 AM

Love your take on this theme! Destiny effects all things, even the smallest or least conspicuous. // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/1/2014 3:12:00 AM

Go!go dear..:D

Paul Callus
Date: 6/30/2014 3:20:00 PM

..back again for another read and with congratulations:)

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/11/2014 7:56:00 AM

Thank you, Paul. I am trying to learn to reach outside the box where true poetry exists, hoping to grasp one some day... Hugs.. Arlene...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:40:00 AM

Arlene, that is right where it was meant to be... Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2014 9:48:00 PM

a very nice thought. It is awesome to see where people's thoughts go with these destiny poems. Just wait till I get mine up. I don't think anyone has one like mine!

Arlene Smith
Date: 6/7/2014 5:10:00 AM

I can't wait!!!.. You amaze me wit you ability to think out of the box! I love it!!... Good luck, my friend!... When I read your poems, I always say to myself, "Why didn't I think of that?" lol....And thank you!...