Destiny

 Burked by the sun

moon hides during the day ,

night her destiny.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/18/2014 3:56:00 PM

Kiran, Thanks for the reply on my comment...Linda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2014 9:48:00 AM

this one was a favorite of mine. Wish it wer e in the TOP> Congratulations. though.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/1/2014 5:13:00 AM

A very inspiring and creative write, Kiran, congrats on the win

Arlene Smith

Date: 6/30/2014 9:35:00 PM

Congrats on a great win, Kiran. Hugs.. Arlene

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:13:00 AM

thank u very much Arlene!

Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/30/2014 9:13:00 PM

Kiran, congrats for the nice win on this lovely Haiku. Mohan

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:14:00 AM

thank u very much Mohan!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/30/2014 4:28:00 PM

Hi Kiran, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your fine win. Lovely Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:15:00 AM

thank u very much Pandita! I appreciate it.

Paul Callus

Date: 6/30/2014 3:43:00 PM

Enjoyable haiku, Kiran! lovely 3rd line! Congratulations on a merited win! // paul

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:15:00 AM

thank u very much Paul! I appreciate it.

Len Gasun

Date: 6/30/2014 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations my dear friend for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:17:00 AM

thank u very much Leonora ! I appreciate it, take care.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/9/2014 8:43:00 AM

Kiran, great haiku...Linda

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:18:00 AM

as always thank you !

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/5/2014 10:22:00 PM

oh, I love that idea. Night her destiny. I have a love poem I wrote on this very subject!!!

Kiran Bantawa
Date: 7/1/2014 4:19:00 AM

nice to know that & thank you for loving it.