Destiny

Predestination?
I'd maybe believe in it,
If not for free choice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Michaels Avatar
July 10, 2014 at 5:02 AM
Congrats on the win!
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2014 at 9:29 AM
But predestination supposes how we will act under any situation, free choice or not, doesn't it? Well, that is my belief. In any event, I love this one. It's a very good one for provoking thought!!
Jamoner Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Congratz for the win! You deserve it! Wishing you all the Best always! - Doris
Mehta Avatar
July 1, 2014 at 2:21 AM
Conveyed a great thought in simple way, Mark. congrats
Gorelick Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 7:21 PM
Now, this is my favorite ...clever thinking. congrats. BG
Smith Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:44 PM
I totally agree, Mark!! Congrats on a great win! Hugs.. Arlene
Sietesantos Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 4:34 PM
Hi Mark, a huge congratulations to you, my friend for your great win. Wonderful Haiku. Warmest regards. Pandita
Gasun Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 11:10 AM
Congratulations my dear friend, Mark for an awesome haiku with a theme and title, “destiny”. Thanks a lot for your loving support. Big Hugs! Love lots, Leonora
A   Avatar
June 9, 2014 at 8:50 AM
wishing you luck...PD
Lindley Avatar
June 7, 2014 at 2:00 PM
Very good one my friend...free choice , where would we be without it? And how much trouble could we avoid?
Palmer Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:32 PM
yep,great write Mark
Callus Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 6:23 PM
Right you are! It's our choices that make the difference in life. // paul
Callus Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 3:22 PM
Congratulations on a merited win!
Mohn Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 4:53 PM
Clever Mark...very good
Onclaud Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 4:51 PM
good one, mark... huggs!
Tanner Avatar
June 4, 2014 at 4:48 PM
Ohh. Very good, with depth. Nice job! Good luck on the contest!
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