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Destiny

Life is at stand still Destiny is in reaching That vanilla sky FOR VANILLA SKY CONTEST

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Date: 9/10/2010 2:12:00 PM

Glad I ran across this one today. Our sky in North Dakota is a bit gray today. Like the uplifting feel of this poem. Keep on writing. Thank you for your recent comment. Have a good weekend. Karen

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/14/2010 9:52:00 PM

very nice, another contest I remember!

Shirin Neshat

Date: 5/1/2010 1:18:00 AM

I like this poem, I hope one day your destiny would come true

Date: 4/28/2010 9:25:00 AM

What an uplifting view. Like the message. Much said in just three lines. Keep on writing! Thank you for sharing your poem with us. Karen

Skat A

Date: 4/25/2010 8:07:00 PM

Enjoyed the best of luck in the contest,,Irma

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2010 1:29:00 PM

There was a movie one time called "October Sky"...Seems like it was about the first astronuts when they were young..Strange that I would think of that when I saw your last line..Nice write that should do well in the contest...Good luck...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

John Beam

Date: 4/25/2010 11:53:00 AM

thank you falishia very nice hope you do well have great day

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/24/2010 7:53:00 PM

Good luck in the contest

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2010 7:46:00 PM

good luck in the contest, nice read you have here,..p.d