Destiny

As someone said
"You live upon what destiny has written for you."
She then replied with:
"if your destiny 
is to die unfairly,
to suffer as eternal as it's permitted by time,
to love hat's not prohibited
to have to sacrifice unfairly
you would want to write your own destiny
and trust
to love what you deserve
to stand up
and end the suffering of what's called destiny."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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September 15, 2026 at 7:01 AM
I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly
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