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Contest: 4x4x4

Sponsor: Miranda Hawley

26 January 2025

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Destiny

What am I doing Here on this Earth What is my purpose What is my worth Will I be famous For something I do Will I be wealthy I haven’t a clue Will taking the plunge Or seizing the day Or going for broke Bring riches my way Am I a leader Will I be led I’ve made my decision… I’m staying in bed
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Date: 2/1/2025 4:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Doing all that thinking about what you could do is just so tiring. Sara K
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/11/2025 4:43:00 PM
Ain’t that the truth ;-) thanks, Sara
Date: 1/31/2025 3:15:00 AM
- Life is too short to stay in bed, Terry :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/11/2025 4:43:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. Glad you enjoyed
Date: 1/31/2025 2:09:00 AM
this is great, congratulations
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Terry Flood
Date: 2/11/2025 4:42:00 PM
Thanks, Terry.
Date: 1/25/2025 5:01:00 PM
Haha…..you're back!! A great poem and didn't expect that last line! King of the last liners is you!!! Ha….Debx
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Terry Flood
Date: 1/30/2025 3:52:00 PM
I think ‘back’ might be pushing it, Deb. But it was nice to get something on paper - so to speak. For lack of new ideas I keep tweaking my slush pile to no avail. Just about managed to get a Rum and Raisin episode presentable…. Everything else is about ready for the delete button. Glad you enjoyed this tiny glimmer of light ;-)
Date: 1/25/2025 4:29:00 PM
Even staying in bed is a decision. I don’t think I will be wealthy, with years of clues…lol.
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Terry Flood
Date: 1/25/2025 4:36:00 PM
Always time, Kim. I’m putting my faith in the National Lottery. I just need to decide to buy a ticket!
Date: 1/25/2025 4:14:00 PM
Perfect rhymes, perfect ending. Feels like a weener!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/25/2025 4:29:00 PM
Same here. I can't write under compulsion. I just have to wait till something inspires me
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Terry Flood
Date: 1/25/2025 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. Im rarely (never) accused of undue brevity so I wasn’t sure I’d be up for this contest. But the fog cleared momentarily, allowing me to give it a go. Been a little ‘blocked’ lately so it’s good to get something down. Terry
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