Destiny

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a lonely melancholic caterpillar wrapped up in its tiny little universe with its teeny caterpillar dreams single-mindedly oblivious to its own destiny unaware what journey lies ahead clueless of its fate to soon take flight on emancipated wings of a monarch butterfly Published in my 24-page photo/anthology ~SUNSETTING WHISPERS~ 2020 Submitted on March 20, 2020 for contest STRAND CHOICE L sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on April 12, 2019

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 4/15/2019 11:59:00 AM

Like many who blossom into beauty

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2019 12:00:00 PM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Timothy.

Caycay Jennings

Date: 4/12/2019 12:07:00 PM

This is lovely and took me to thoughts about animals and nature being oblivious to tomorrow and death; centered only in now they live fully and sometimes morph into creatures of flight and/or beauty. This poem made me think so me thinks this a great poem, Line! Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/12/2019 3:11:00 PM

Thanks, CayCay. There are so many things in nature that explain the unknown in life. I believe that humans go through the same metamorphosis.