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Destination Unknown

Still l'm searching for explanation The deepest corners of my mind l roam With once again the same old question Is anything ever really setting stone Trying to form some sort of foundation Between mind and heart l can call home Perhaps though its still the realisation That this cast lm in lve not yet outgrown Or could it be that my only real limitation lm still too stuck within my comfort zone Whenever l am asked whats my destination It feels as of yet the great unknown Abstracts from poem 2007 where do l go from here

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/4/2023 5:32:00 PM

I, too, still feel as if I were a young person, still so unsure of my future. Maybe, we never really lose that feeling, no matter our age... This poem is wonderful, David, and really quite thought-provoking. So well done :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2021 7:31:00 PM

yes, I think many are wondering this same thing. A great reflecting poem

David Scott
Date: 6/9/2021 9:51:00 PM

Thankyou for your kind words l know we all in same situation at moment this was written few years back diffrent situation lets hope curent situation improves

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/8/2021 6:42:00 PM

It takes time to realize our dreams and our true destination dear poet. If we are lucky we find it along the way of self discovery. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with me David. I hope to read more of your poetry in the future :P

David Scott
Date: 6/9/2021 9:49:00 PM

Thankyou for your kind words like wise

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/8/2021 5:43:00 PM

Destination -- Shifting Sands of Never-Never Land. :) gw

David Scott
Date: 6/9/2021 9:49:00 PM

Thankyou for your kind words

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/8/2021 5:19:00 AM

Well said! Love it!

David Scott
Date: 6/9/2021 9:51:00 PM

Thankyou for your kind words

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/8/2021 4:54:00 AM

You wrote an excellent poem David; we are always looking for guidance, but as we get older, we get persuaded that the straight route has always been the most reliable road. Thanks for visiting my page and commenting on my poem.

David Scott
Date: 6/9/2021 9:48:00 PM

Thank you too l think lfe a bit of a zig zag atimes perhaps so many distractions

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/7/2021 11:27:00 PM

There is only one way to go. On the straight and narrow. One suffers in this world but achieves bliss in the next.

David Scott
Date: 6/9/2021 9:53:00 PM

Lets hope thankyou for your kind words

Judy Ball

Date: 6/7/2021 2:09:00 PM

The age old question: Who Am I? What am I? WHY am I? The Bible tells us plainly that we are the creation of God The Father Almighty. Created because He wanted something to love and something that would love Him back. The only way that Satan can hurt God is to steal that which He loves. His best weapon of choice is UNBELIEF. My destination is I get to go sit at the feet of The Father. YeeHaaa! God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/7/2021 12:00:00 PM

Hello David Scott, yes David our destination is unknown. No one can predict their future. Enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/8/2021 4:31:00 PM

Hello David Scott, yes there is uncertainty in this world. I agree I hope also that things get better. xx

David Scott
Date: 6/7/2021 9:57:00 PM

Thankyou for yiur kind words this was written good few years ago l agree right now so much uncertanty for us all lets hope things get better

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/7/2021 3:50:00 PM

Hello David Scott, no sense of direction- many people have no sense of direction. Well David i think that yu have done very well on this poem. xx

David Scott
Date: 6/7/2021 1:26:00 PM

I know l meant having no sense if direction even before world situaion this was taken from another poem called where do lgo from here was trying to be more abstract structer and form rather than content xx