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Despite sins salvation path HE offers

Great is one who ACCEPT ONEs errors Human has weakness of pointing fingers And hunting scapegoat to camouflage own errors Temporary can be relief from criticism that errors trigger Others may get convinced but guilt in conscience ever lingers Greater is one who ACCEPT OTHERs errors Acceptance relieves the burden of punishing other Generates atmosphere for searching solution together Positivity leading path better, committed error on backburner Others love and adore for treating as human, vulnerable to error Greatest is one who FORGIVES other errors Ever heard complaint from trees, mountains, river ? Humans use, abuse, but Natures bounty shower forever Forgiveness is subtle respecting own Soul through Soul in other Humans ought to learn from HIM, despite sins Salvation path HE offers --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hitendra Mehta Entry for Members contest : "To err is human to forgive Divine" by Audrey Carey

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Date: 12/24/2010 9:54:00 PM
YOur third stanza is a really great argument for forgiveness, Hitendra. Judge not that ye be not judged. I have always loved that philosophy too! I hope you are well today and that you will have good luck in this contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 12/24/2010 5:39:00 AM
great poem
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Date: 12/24/2010 3:34:00 AM
Wonderfully written
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