Despite Sins Salvation Path He Offers

Great is one who ACCEPT ONEs errors
          Human has weakness of  pointing fingers
          And hunting scapegoat to camouflage own errors  
          Temporary can be relief from criticism that errors trigger
          Others may get convinced but guilt in conscience ever lingers   	

Greater is one who ACCEPT OTHERs errors
             Acceptance relieves the burden of punishing other     
             Generates atmosphere for searching solution together 
             Positivity leading path better, committed error on backburner           
             Others love and adore for treating as human, vulnerable to error         

Greatest is one who FORGIVES other errors
               Ever heard complaint from trees, mountains, river ?
               Humans use, abuse, but Natures bounty shower forever       
               Forgiveness is subtle respecting own Soul through Soul in other  
               Humans ought to learn from HIM, despite sins Salvation path HE offers


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Hitendra Mehta
Entry for Members contest : "To err is human to forgive Divine" by Audrey Carey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/24/2010 9:54:00 PM
YOur third stanza is a really great argument for forgiveness, Hitendra. Judge not that ye be not judged. I have always loved that philosophy too! I hope you are well today and that you will have good luck in this contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 12/24/2010 5:39:00 AM
great poem
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Date: 12/24/2010 3:34:00 AM
Wonderfully written
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