Desperation

Only five minutes can seem 
like eons to a man trapped
in an elevator with
his mother-in-law.

April 19, 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 10:44 AM
i had fun with this, janice.. good one that deserves a win my my contest.. thanks and huggs
Canerdy Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 2:39 PM
Nette, thank you so much! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 9:43 AM
I loved this one the first time I saw it. For me one of the best! Congrats for your win.
Canerdy Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 2:41 PM
Andrea, thank you so much! Janice
Cheema Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 8:28 AM
I return with my congrats Janice!
Canerdy Avatar
June 26, 2016 at 2:43 PM
Thank you so much, Balveen! Janice
Rycroft Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 1:39 AM
Ha Ha certainly can x well thought up x wendy x
Canerdy Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 1:07 PM
Thanks, Wendy! Glad you liked it. Janice
Allison Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 11:12 AM
ha ha ha love it:-) hugs jan xx
Canerdy Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 11:39 AM
Thanks, Jan. Glad you got a kick out of it! Janice
Dietrich Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:58 PM
my favorite so far of the fully booked ones I have been seeing. LOVE it.
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:00 PM
THANK YOU so much, Andrea! Janice
Cheema Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:57 PM
Poor guy! Good Luck!
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Thank you, Balveen! Janice
Rodrigues Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Cute!
Canerdy Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 9:02 PM
Thank you, Kim! Janice
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