Desperation

Only five minutes can seem 
like eons to a man trapped
in an elevator with
his mother-in-law.

April 19, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 6/26/2016 10:44:00 AM
i had fun with this, janice.. good one that deserves a win my my contest.. thanks and huggs
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/26/2016 2:39:00 PM
Nette, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 6/26/2016 9:43:00 AM
I loved this one the first time I saw it. For me one of the best! Congrats for your win.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/26/2016 2:41:00 PM
Andrea, thank you so much! Janice
Date: 6/26/2016 8:28:00 AM
I return with my congrats Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/26/2016 2:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Balveen! Janice
Date: 6/24/2016 1:39:00 AM
Ha Ha certainly can x well thought up x wendy x
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/24/2016 1:07:00 PM
Thanks, Wendy! Glad you liked it. Janice
Date: 6/23/2016 11:12:00 AM
ha ha ha love it:-) hugs jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/23/2016 11:39:00 AM
Thanks, Jan. Glad you got a kick out of it! Janice
Date: 6/22/2016 8:58:00 PM
my favorite so far of the fully booked ones I have been seeing. LOVE it.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/22/2016 9:00:00 PM
THANK YOU so much, Andrea! Janice
Date: 6/22/2016 8:57:00 PM
Poor guy! Good Luck!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/22/2016 9:00:00 PM
Thank you, Balveen! Janice
Date: 6/22/2016 8:27:00 PM
Cute!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/22/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Janice
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