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Desperate Sun, Dying Sun

I have a half solution It is cruel and unjust but it works It lacks commitment and trust but fills the hole in my heart It is only a quarter of a full answer Do not look too close or you will find A sadness so deep A longing so severe A thrashing sun screaming for a meaningful connection A dying sun Yearning for her orbit to have enough strength To find a celestial body To keep

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