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Desperate hope

Cry of our soul voices a desperate hope, beseeching presence to gentle flow of thought, having suffered long, now unable to cope with plethora of fears, all ego begot, for our soul wishes now, with love to elope, radiating divine light, to be self-taught. Weary soul asks us to shift from head to heart, for that is where we feel bliss ignition start.

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Date: 1/10/2024 10:03:00 PM
"our soul wishes now, with love to elope" - true, indeed. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Chris!
Date: 1/10/2024 1:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully written Ottava Rima Seeker. Enjoyed it.
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:53:00 PM
Thanks for hosting, Edward, big effort. So happy you enjoyed
Date: 1/10/2024 11:09:00 AM
Wow I could never master this form as you have! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/10/2024 10:51:00 PM
It’s quite a simple style, Karen :)

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