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Desolate

desolate park bench stories behind each wrinkle Submitted on March 2, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (MAR 4) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST Originally posted on April 14, 2018

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Suzanne Delaney
Date: 3/6/2021 5:48:00 AM
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Congratulations Line: we can all learn from stories...happy or sad. Hugs, SuZ
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/6/2021 1:10:00 PM
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Thanks, SuZ ~
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/5/2021 5:44:00 AM
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So much said in so few words, Line! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/5/2021 12:10:00 PM
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Thanks, Janice ~ much appreciated
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/15/2018 10:03:00 PM
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Once more, you have added a 'new wrinkle' to the montage of life and hidden secrets. Myself, I look at large-bloc apt. bldgs. and wonder what stories lurk in the drama taking place behind each window...Never thought of that reg. the lines in the park benches. So perceptive! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/16/2018 9:40:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Gershon. I too wonder about what stories are behind home windows especially at night - knowing they range from the hideous to the noblest.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/15/2018 7:44:00 PM
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Love this one, LIne. I had to get sidetracked a bit!!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 9:11:00 PM
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Thanks for your visit, Andrea.
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Jack Horne
Date: 4/15/2018 2:29:00 PM
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oh, so sad but an excellent haiku
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 3:53:00 PM
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OK, a bit of a downer... especially compared to your cheerful style that I enjoy so much. Line xx
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Mike Hauser
Date: 4/15/2018 10:59:00 AM
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You're very good at these
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 11:46:00 AM
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Thank you so much, Mike. Much appreciated. 50% of the work and credit is with the reader who does the imagery in their head.
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Tom Cunningham
Date: 4/15/2018 10:23:00 AM
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A lifetime of memories both good and bad.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 11:46:00 AM
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Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Tom.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 4/14/2018 11:52:00 PM
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A mood haiku that works well with depression Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 4/15/2018 12:50:00 AM
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Not the cheeriest most uplifting poem, Caren. Sorry!

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