Desiring the Vampire

It was the Southern French window blowing open 
                    he came in the night no word spoken 
                The eyes so sensual and piercing me as if nothing matters
                     he is all I think of now as each day I grow weaker

               I will soon die unsure of my fate 
                  my life I will give to him a offering I ask him to take
               This man so desirable with dark eyes and hair
                  even if he is not a man but a beast 
                I no longer care I submit to the last drop of blood

                 As I lay with a cotton white gown in a locked room 
                   I throw my rope of Garlic far to be seen 
                 Nothing can stop this now longing and lustful 
                      feeling like I'm in a forever dream  

                    I wait for him too enter 
                       I wait for him
                                  willing to die 
                               I wait losing my Religion
                                   The Vampires offering am I              
                                   
                          

                 " For That Archaic Poets contest " Shanity Rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 3/31/2014 5:46:00 PM
Suspence threw out. Enjoyed this write.
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Date: 12/8/2013 4:34:00 PM
I like how you told this from the victim's perspective. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/8/2013 7:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Shanity xx
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Date: 12/7/2013 4:50:00 AM
Congrats on the win, Vie
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Date: 9/28/2013 9:22:00 PM
Where have you been hiding? You are a lovely poet!!!
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Shanity Rain
Date: 9/28/2013 10:32:00 PM
You are the sweetest !! Thank-you for all the reading you are doing . I like you a lot ~ Yvette
Date: 9/22/2013 3:42:00 PM
IN THE WEAKNESS PENNED THE DESIRE IN THE DREAM VERY BEAUTIFULLY PENNED
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/23/2013 3:16:00 AM
IT BOILS WITHIN THE BLOOD DESIRE OH NEED TO OPEN THE WINDOWS FOR THE VAMPIRE
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Shanity Rain
Date: 9/22/2013 8:38:00 PM
one of these desirable rainy days ;)
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