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Desire

For you my love, I've a great desire. Like a kindling forest fire. Do you feel the same way i feel for you? Please say yes, say that it's true. I have deep feelings for you, yet you eat them and continue to chew. You know how I feel, but still shocked me like an eel. Nothing can stop my burning desire, It will never grow old or tired. Though in time you have eased up, It's just the start of my luck. I see your eyes now when you see me, I see the desire, your full of glee. Now your mine, you see how I feel. The shock is gone from the eel. Now that I'm happy and you are too. We can live peacefully, just me and you.

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Date: 2/17/2010 7:40:00 AM
Has she read this??? If not she should....Good work my friend...:JP]
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