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DESERVE Deserve- that in which we use to critique our life's ways a way to hold back our existence to project a negative and cease the positive intake Deserve - the breath we don't take as life is critical and cruel A risk we avoid A praise we reject A life unlived by definition of the term Deserve - the animosity within that deprives us of beauty a vast cavernous region of self loathing unfathomable entities that we must surpass to succeed striving for more - better Deserve - enraptures a lustful desire to withdraw and hide shades of veils, impenetrable walls of denial vulnerabilities and nakedness the exposure of truth - internalised we hide - we die Deserve - you deserve all that you have you deserve the power from recognition and you deserve forgiveness forgiveness of self, of others; which cannot be attained but self as best it can Deserve - Deserve - Deserve Angered by such a dismissal I am so wondrous in 'sup-prose' you ... your inner musings, your lexical landscape your shy confidence self depreciating You DESERVE more Deserve - embrace, reclaim, rejoice recognise the wealth my versifying friend the promise in the scroll of a pen the battle within let it bleed across the page and cleanse with deliberate introspection stand tall... for my friend - you DESERVE it all

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Date: 11/8/2018 2:25:00 PM
Hello Lifes Tapestry, this poem is deep with meaning.Wow! Have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 11/9/2018 5:53:00 PM
You are welcomed.
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 11/9/2018 9:54:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/31/2018 6:28:00 PM
Fine piece so well penned with great imagery and nice rhyme. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 10/31/2018 2:27:00 PM
I have been there and come out the other side triumphant. "the promise in the scroll of a pen the battle within let it bleed across the page and cleanse withdeliberate introspection stand tall..." A magnificent write going into my faves! Blessings and Aloha, Connie : )
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Date: 10/31/2018 12:49:00 PM
Beautiful! What a nice way to encourage a friend. Beautiful words.
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Date: 10/20/2018 12:14:00 AM
Much truth lies in thy words. Loved every verse, especially the last one which did touch beautifully. But, I'll only touch the surfaces on this. We'll talk another day in detail. (SERVE & VERSE) ~~~/|\~~~ This one I will however add to my faves, I supprose.
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/20/2018 8:39:00 AM
ohhh you 'sup-prose' much hahahaha
Date: 10/18/2018 11:02:00 AM
This wonderful crafted piece of writing bellows in echoes of anger if I am reading this correctly. And if I am not, sorry. What do any of us deserve? We either earn it or we don't. I guess in some cases what is earned is not delivered and therefore the term "deserve" comes up. But I have heard so many claim they deserve something just because. Because what? You though my friend do deserve to receive accolades for this amazing piece of writing. So, bravo! This was fantastic.
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Lifes' Tapestry
Date: 10/18/2018 12:35:00 PM
Thank you Anger is correct for a fine man of late believes he deserves nothing in the context epitomising loss of living life - I wanted to call this an elegy - say good bye to the imprisoning concept of deserve - and live - just a truth to a kindred soul

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