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Desert Sun

desert sun -
your eyes waterfalls 
of love

Copyright © Black Eyed Susan | Year Posted 2011

lifelovefree verse

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Poet Destroyer A

November 19, 2012 at 4:01 PM

SUSAN.. nice image... to hold out to....life is love... what a living concept....lol...pd

Michael J. Falotico

July 23, 2011 at 4:49 PM

"Will you ever Know" was written for the same lady I wrote "What my eyes see now".... A lady who passed through my life too fast but left an impression I will never shake...... thank you for asking...luv Michael

July 10, 2011 at 12:06 PM

Enjoyed reading your win..Congrats on your win..Sara

July 9, 2011 at 10:30 PM

amazing, susan! swinging cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs

Jun-Jun Villanueva

July 9, 2011 at 9:11 PM

CONGRATULATIONS on the win! *-* junjun

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 9, 2011 at 3:44 PM

Congrats Susan on your fantastic win with this brilliant beauty luv...

Carol Sunshine Brown

July 9, 2011 at 12:16 PM

Congratulations on your win Susan in John Moses Freeman's "The Precept: Nature's Haiku"contest. Love, Carol

July 9, 2011 at 10:57 AM

Congrats Susan on your win.

Barbara Gorelick

July 9, 2011 at 10:49 AM

Beautifully done..congrats on your win. BG

July 9, 2011 at 9:19 AM

Susan, Great life precept, Congratulations, Thanks for support of this effort. Agape, Moses

July 9, 2011 at 9:13 AM

My congratulations on this win in the contest of John, Susan

July 9, 2011 at 8:58 AM

Many congrats, Susan : )

July 2, 2011 at 1:44 PM

great haiku

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 1, 2011 at 9:46 PM

elegant and emotional Susan.. good luck in the contest luv..happy 4th to u.. delightful words..

Andrea Dietrich

July 1, 2011 at 7:31 PM

Hey there Susan. I love the message of your poem here. Good luck with the contest and it was a pleasure to hear from you today.

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