Bj Legros Kelley Poet Haiku

Desert Rain

                                                   cascading silver

                                          thunder awakens the dead

                                                     river rises up

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Anon Y'Mous July 23, 2026 at 2:58 PM One word, overwhelming. You have definitely captured the power of a mighty storm.

Sara Kendrick July 21, 2026 at 5:15 AM Creative lines penned in this one, BJ, I enjoyed reading it. Rivers' rising has had dire results for so many this year even repeats of last year for some. Thanks for sharing this one with us. Sara K.

Kim Rodrigues July 20, 2026 at 4:01 PM Wow that middle line reverberates!

Andrea Dietrich June 27, 2026 at 2:50 PM Oh. You are rolling with rain recently good one

Valsa George June 25, 2026 at 8:16 PM Beautiful haiku. I like the line- 'cascading silver'