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Desert Gloaming

In the stray lavender of twilight
as cactis' spindled obelisks
brush spreading lapis sky
a honeyed sun 
holds tight
to desert crags
for a last glimpse
of fulgid sage
and adobe rainbow dwellings 
sprawled in the valley.
I await the candle moon's 
flickering smile
shining in gully water
and darts of starlight
glowing in my arid dreams.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on your top win with this poem of beautiful imagery. Well done!
Cozart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Thanks much, Susan.
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June 26, 2018 at 8:44 AM
Beautiful, congatulations
Cozart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:09 AM
Thanks very much, Shirley.
Wade Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:49 AM
Great stuff, congratulations on your win
Cozart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:03 AM
Thank you, Fauxcroft
Krampe Avatar
June 25, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Your poem paints a beautiful desert landscape and makes me want to go back to the desert. Congrats on your win.
Cozart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Thanks very much, Agnes.
Gauthier Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 1:54 PM
Lovely imagery, Dale. A beautiful write.
Cozart Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 2:33 PM
Thank you, Line.
Allison Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 11:35 AM
Absolutely STUNNING and I mean STUNNING imagery Dale:-) I have learned a new word with fulgid:-) another gem for my faves, I think you have found your forte with exceptional free verse and your trademark use of colour:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
June 18, 2018 at 11:39 AM
Aw, thanks so much, Jan.
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