Desert Days

Desert days they stretch beyond, beyond the human frail
Like the heat of its haze, that waves goodbye to sanity’s hallucinations, to
A horizon of fans farewelling lost ridicule
Where only creatures dare hide in a place devoid of belief

Yet desert nights will mock the unaware, for beware the shivering thief
That slithers under sheets, stealing sips from thirsty dreams
Where logic conjures images poisoned by the drowned  

But if your dreams could see, they would show you colours and wonderment
A sky full of diamonds dripping with a vastness so pure
All watched by a moon; bone white against the night
In a cathedral of dimensions and contrast known only to God




Nette Onclaud’s Poetry Contest: In the Desert
Mark Trichet
14 September 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 9, 2015 at 4:21 PM
Mark, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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March 11, 2015 at 5:52 PM
Thanks Linda for your kind words and source of inspiration on the soup to one and all
Nance Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 6:35 AM
Exquisite images, the bone white moon, sanitys hallucinations, enjoyed this winner :)
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September 28, 2014 at 2:31 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Casarah, thanks for the kind words
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September 21, 2014 at 12:18 PM
- A truly wonderful winning poem,Mark - Congrats with the 2nd place ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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September 28, 2014 at 2:30 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Lindley Avatar
September 21, 2014 at 9:55 AM
Congrats on a great win for you! Also giving this one a super 7 and adding this gem to my fav list...
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September 28, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Thanks Robert, it gave me such pleasure walking through this poem in its creation
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September 21, 2014 at 9:27 AM
You are a wonderful poet Mark. What a beautiful pen you own. Congratulations.
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September 28, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Cheers Maurice, a heartfelt thankyou
Dietrich Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 10:30 PM
I was reading it over again. Just wonderful. Congrats in the contest.
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September 28, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thanks again Andrea for the visit
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September 20, 2014 at 2:58 PM
such a gem "in a cathedral of dimensions", mark.. proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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September 20, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Thanks Nette, honoured to be amongst such wonderful writers. Thanks for your time judging this contest...
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September 20, 2014 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations on your beautifully penned poem Mark. Your descriptions were awesome.
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September 20, 2014 at 8:43 PM
Thanks Brenda, glad you enjoyed it
Lawless Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 9:30 AM
Well Done Mark.
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September 20, 2014 at 8:44 PM
Cheers John. Thanks for the visit
Mohn Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 8:34 AM
Wonderfully written...congrats
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September 20, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Thanks david - it was fun to write and imagine the whole thing...
Mehta Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:26 AM
Congrats on the great win, Mark
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September 20, 2014 at 8:45 PM
Appreciate it Dr.
Dietrich Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 4:04 PM
very descriptive AND pretty. I bet this will score high.
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September 20, 2014 at 8:46 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Andrea, it means alot
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September 14, 2014 at 10:57 PM
whoa, I have to rethink my entry, this one far outdoes it. Way to go.BG
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September 20, 2014 at 8:47 PM
Thanks Barbara
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September 14, 2014 at 3:12 PM
Mark; This is a beautiful poem. It sounds like you've had experience in the desert. Good luck in the contest. have a blessed day... Lucilla
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September 20, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Thanks Lucilla. Living in Western Australia, one is never far from anything arid...
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September 14, 2014 at 8:36 AM
Wonderful. Good luck and God bless you... with love and prayers, Gina
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September 20, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Appreciate your thoughts and prayers Regina
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