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Desert Days

Desert days they stretch beyond, beyond the human frail Like the heat of its haze, that waves goodbye to sanity’s hallucinations, to A horizon of fans farewelling lost ridicule Where only creatures dare hide in a place devoid of belief Yet desert nights will mock the unaware, for beware the shivering thief That slithers under sheets, stealing sips from thirsty dreams Where logic conjures images poisoned by the drowned But if your dreams could see, they would show you colours and wonderment A sky full of diamonds dripping with a vastness so pure All watched by a moon; bone white against the night In a cathedral of dimensions and contrast known only to God Nette Onclaud’s Poetry Contest: In the Desert Mark Trichet 14 September 2014

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Date: 3/9/2015 4:21:00 PM
Mark, Congratulations, on your win. Stop by my latest blog "BEGINNINGS" if you'd like. Hope you are having a Wonderful Day, thank you for supporting my contest -Always & Forever- LINDA
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Mark Trichet
Date: 3/11/2015 5:52:00 PM
Thanks Linda for your kind words and source of inspiration on the soup to one and all
Date: 9/22/2014 6:35:00 AM
Exquisite images, the bone white moon, sanitys hallucinations, enjoyed this winner :)
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/28/2014 2:31:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it Casarah, thanks for the kind words
Date: 9/21/2014 12:18:00 PM
- A truly wonderful winning poem,Mark - Congrats with the 2nd place ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/28/2014 2:30:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise
Date: 9/21/2014 9:55:00 AM
Congrats on a great win for you! Also giving this one a super 7 and adding this gem to my fav list...
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/28/2014 2:29:00 AM
Thanks Robert, it gave me such pleasure walking through this poem in its creation
Date: 9/21/2014 9:27:00 AM
You are a wonderful poet Mark. What a beautiful pen you own. Congratulations.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/28/2014 2:28:00 AM
Cheers Maurice, a heartfelt thankyou
Date: 9/20/2014 10:30:00 PM
I was reading it over again. Just wonderful. Congrats in the contest.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/28/2014 2:27:00 AM
Thanks again Andrea for the visit
Date: 9/20/2014 2:58:00 PM
such a gem "in a cathedral of dimensions", mark.. proud to have this in my contest... congrats and huggs
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Nette, honoured to be amongst such wonderful writers. Thanks for your time judging this contest...
Date: 9/20/2014 10:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautifully penned poem Mark. Your descriptions were awesome.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:43:00 PM
Thanks Brenda, glad you enjoyed it
Date: 9/20/2014 9:30:00 AM
Well Done Mark.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:44:00 PM
Cheers John. Thanks for the visit
Date: 9/20/2014 8:34:00 AM
Wonderfully written...congrats
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:45:00 PM
Thanks david - it was fun to write and imagine the whole thing...
Date: 9/20/2014 5:26:00 AM
Congrats on the great win, Mark
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:45:00 PM
Appreciate it Dr.
Date: 9/17/2014 4:04:00 PM
very descriptive AND pretty. I bet this will score high.
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:46:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it Andrea, it means alot
Date: 9/14/2014 10:57:00 PM
whoa, I have to rethink my entry, this one far outdoes it. Way to go.BG
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:47:00 PM
Thanks Barbara
Date: 9/14/2014 3:12:00 PM
Mark; This is a beautiful poem. It sounds like you've had experience in the desert. Good luck in the contest. have a blessed day... Lucilla
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Date: 9/20/2014 8:48:00 PM
Thanks Lucilla. Living in Western Australia, one is never far from anything arid...
Date: 9/14/2014 8:36:00 AM
Wonderful. Good luck and God bless you... with love and prayers, Gina
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Mark Trichet
Date: 9/20/2014 8:49:00 PM
Appreciate your thoughts and prayers Regina

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