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Desert

hail yee not my empty butterfly for thy heart yet not to die i chose yee being alike in some sort of way not all the day thou art thy pain suffering rain on feathers flying of solitude laine how art thy note and fled to boat no love no vain no notice why now shall i blame for what once was a game

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Date: 9/20/2016 7:57:00 AM
heil ye, i come to thee, for what once was mine, is now to thee. Thank you :))
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Date: 9/20/2016 6:49:00 AM
Deep breaths, fond thoughts, nice words, no swords, ... nice ...
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Date: 9/20/2016 5:45:00 AM
thank you i appreciate it.
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Date: 9/20/2016 4:49:00 AM
You have elaborated the subject eloquently and uniquely, and the use of archaic language even makes the poem more charming.Great write Talin.
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