Desert

hail  yee not my empty butterfly
for thy heart yet not to die
i chose yee being alike
in some sort of way
not all the day
thou art thy pain suffering rain
on feathers flying of solitude laine
how art thy note and fled to boat
no love no vain no notice
why now shall i blame
for what once was a game
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kalishian Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 7:57 AM
heil ye, i come to thee, for what once was mine, is now to thee. Thank you :))
Gupta Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 6:49 AM
Deep breaths, fond thoughts, nice words, no swords, ... nice ...
Kalishian Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 5:45 AM
thank you i appreciate it.
Raha Avatar
September 20, 2016 at 4:49 AM
You have elaborated the subject eloquently and uniquely, and the use of archaic language even makes the poem more charming.Great write Talin.
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