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Desensitization

There’s a young girl in my arms Clutching me so tight that I don’t think she’ll ever let go Her tears stain my shoulder Her grief wracks my own body I can smell her hair, the beautiful scent Engulfs my face But I feel nothing Except the warmth of our embrace My emptiness swells Is it strange to want to share someone’s pain?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/31/2009 4:46:00 PM
Interesting reflection. Welcome to Poetry Soup! I hope you enjoy your time spent with us. Best wishes with your writing. Karen
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:08:00 PM
Thank you, thank you
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Date: 1/30/2009 8:02:00 PM
The ability to sense grief in another is a gift... to do something about it is divine. Well done Jarrod! Best wishes, Keith (PS welcome to the Soup!)
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Date: 1/30/2009 7:20:00 PM
Thank you so much.
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Date: 1/30/2009 5:11:00 PM
This poem is awesome!!! I really like this one... Dodie Albritton...
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Date: 1/30/2009 11:35:00 AM
It really is. Thanks for reading.
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Date: 1/30/2009 10:10:00 AM
lovely piece, you've created. thats one hell of a feeling huh?
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Date: 1/30/2009 5:57:00 AM
tThank you very very much. This is my first attempt at real, serious poetry, not written for a class or anything, but just for myself.
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Date: 1/29/2009 11:05:00 PM
Jarrod, I love the flow of this and the way you put the reader there with you. Well done. Donna G.
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