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Desdemona

Desdemona Desmond desires to dive into devout Desiree’s dreams She dispenses delicious divinity yet destiny dangles defeat Deep in deluge he discovers dazzling demons and devils When diabolical deceit dawns in desolate desperation Des descries in despair and decides to die from devotion

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Line Gauthier

Date: 8/15/2018 10:38:00 AM

Love this clever alliteration, Kai.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 8/18/2018 5:06:00 AM

Thank you Line.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/24/2017 12:04:00 PM

Done deftly, Kai I LOVED IT!

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/25/2017 4:35:00 AM

Thnaks Ralph. I appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 6/21/2017 7:38:00 PM

Wouldn't want to read it aloud, great alliteration bordering on tongue twisters. Congratulations, Kai.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/22/2017 3:16:00 AM

Thank you Reason A. Poteet. I do not do alliterations much, but when I do, I play plain silly. It is a brain twister...Many wishes, Kai

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/21/2017 11:31:00 AM

WOW/ Great poem--CONGRATS on your win, Michael! Janice

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/22/2017 3:17:00 AM

Thank you Janice. In a way just random words...Many wishes, Kai

Rob Carmack

Date: 6/21/2017 12:47:00 AM

I am not a big fan of alliteration, but this one is an exception. Congrats Kai.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/22/2017 3:19:00 AM

Thank you and thank you for hosting the contest. Kai

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/13/2017 2:32:00 PM

Beautifully conveyed Kai! Your alliteration is top notch in this piece! 7 ; )

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 6/22/2017 3:20:00 AM

Thank you Connie. I appreciate that. No silly alliterations today, I'll have to write something serious. Like what? The day will show...Many wishes, Kai