Desdemona

Desdemona

Desmond desires to dive into devout Desiree’s dreams

She dispenses delicious divinity yet destiny dangles defeat

Deep in deluge he discovers dazzling demons and devils

When diabolical deceit dawns in desolate desperation

Des descries in despair and decides to die from devotion
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gauthier Avatar
August 15, 2018 at 10:38 AM
Love this clever alliteration, Kai.
Neumann Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 5:06 AM
Thank you Line.
Sergi Avatar
June 24, 2017 at 12:04 PM
Done deftly, Kai I LOVED IT!
Neumann Avatar
June 25, 2017 at 4:35 AM
Thnaks Ralph. I appreciate that. Many wishes, Kai
Poteet Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 7:38 PM
Wouldn't want to read it aloud, great alliteration bordering on tongue twisters. Congratulations, Kai.
Neumann Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 3:16 AM
Thank you Reason A. Poteet. I do not do alliterations much, but when I do, I play plain silly. It is a brain twister...Many wishes, Kai
Canerdy Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 11:31 AM
WOW/ Great poem--CONGRATS on your win, Michael! Janice
Neumann Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 3:17 AM
Thank you Janice. In a way just random words...Many wishes, Kai
Carmack Avatar
June 21, 2017 at 12:47 AM
I am not a big fan of alliteration, but this one is an exception. Congrats Kai.
Neumann Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 3:19 AM
Thank you and thank you for hosting the contest. Kai
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 13, 2017 at 2:32 PM
Beautifully conveyed Kai! Your alliteration is top notch in this piece! 7 ; )
Neumann Avatar
June 22, 2017 at 3:20 AM
Thank you Connie. I appreciate that. No silly alliterations today, I'll have to write something serious. Like what? The day will show...Many wishes, Kai
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