Describing a Stranger

A stranger was seen 
Waiting at a bus stop
He was short in height
His hair was almost grey
The colour of his eyes blue
He had small narrow nose
With a small mustashe
That hid his lips well

He wore a black suite 
Followed by a white shirt
His tie a royal blue colour
His shoes were new black
He looked very handsome
Being physical challenged
He walked with his crutches
Now he looks forward to meet-
His girlfriend on a date
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 8/4/2021 9:11:00 PM
What you discribed here, Darlene, was the enthusiasm in this man going to meet his girlfriend, to whom he dressed well for, nothing else was seen, because nothing else mattered, I hope he had a pleasant evening . . . : )
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2021 11:12:00 AM
Hello Indiana Shaw, this man was determined to go on a date with his girlfriend. He succeeded. They had an enjoyable evening sent. Blessing my friend.
Date: 4/15/2021 11:19:00 AM
Wat a marvelous poem and developed concept...Key word, "Now", it resets the entire poem. Thanks - Your friend, Ken
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2021 3:24:00 PM
Hello Ken Rone, thank you for a wonderful comment Ken. Enjoy your evening my friend Ken.--Darlene
Date: 3/16/2021 6:55:00 AM
A well composed picture, amusing description, a story unfolding for life and for what seems like a happy ending! Nice work my dear, salute alkas
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2021 12:23:00 PM
Hello Alakas, hi! yes story unfolding in my poetry. yes it has a happy ending. Thank you for the lovely comment. Salute Alakas my friend.
Date: 3/10/2021 6:39:00 PM
I pictured him during the reading of both stanzas and I smiled.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 6:04:00 AM
Hello Caren so do I picture him the same way. Hugs Darlene.
Date: 2/21/2021 3:42:00 AM
simple beautiful poem, with a lovely message! Heart is not crippled in love, whatever the physical handicap!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/22/2021 5:41:00 AM
Helllo Krish, yes that is right. the heart is not crippled. He is living his life Blessings my friend.
Date: 2/17/2021 6:25:00 AM
What a wonderful deep descriptive poem, Darlene. I wonder were you his date???
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Date: 2/17/2021 8:13:00 AM
Hello Harry , His date is meeting him at a restaurant for their date. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/16/2021 1:15:00 PM
A fine description of the young man at the bus stop. Being physically challenged doesn't mean you can't have fun. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/16/2021 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Judy. Exactly Judy, they can have fun to. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Date: 2/15/2021 3:32:00 PM
Charming Darlene. A great write! Linda
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Date: 2/16/2021 10:41:00 AM
Hello Linda, Fowler, oh, thank you Linda. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/13/2021 11:03:00 AM
- I see he's ready for his date, I hope they have a lovely day :) - Great written, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/13/2021 3:42:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes he is ready for his date. I hope he has a good time. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/13/2021 9:47:00 AM
I enjoyed your description of this well dressed man awaiting his date!
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2021 10:33:00 AM
Hello Andrea, Andrea, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/12/2021 8:54:00 PM
You did a fine job of describing this intriguing gentleman, Darlene. He seems destined for a wonderful evening. My very best wishes, Evelyn
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Date: 2/13/2021 10:38:00 AM
Hello Evelyn, Thank you. Yes I see him having a wonderful date with his girlfriend. enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/12/2021 11:57:00 AM
That’s so lovely Darlene, even those who depend on crutches or sticks have a heart, I know because once upon a time in my life those things played a huge part... Belle
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Date: 2/12/2021 12:36:00 PM
Hello Belle, yes thse that walk with crutches,or in wheelchairs do have a heart. i also was on crutches at one time. Thes people do have a heart. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/11/2021 2:14:00 PM
Very nice! You described this handsome man then let us see his crutches. Nicely done! Hope they had a sweet date!
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Date: 2/11/2021 2:39:00 PM
Hello Kim, thank you Kim, yes they did have a romantic date. Higs Darlene.
Date: 2/8/2021 5:14:00 PM
Great poem dear and thank you for the input on mine.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 5:19:00 AM
Hello James McLain, oh your welcome i enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for the lovely comment on this poem I created. Enjoy your day my friend.
Date: 2/8/2021 3:49:00 PM
You have described him and the situation so well Darlene. Great one! Have a nice night :)
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Date: 2/9/2021 5:20:00 AM
Hello Heidi, Heidi, thank you. I hope you had a good night sleep. Hugs Darlene
Date: 2/8/2021 11:47:00 AM
Love this Darlene. Hope you don't mind if I FaV it, this is one of your best. Descriptive with meaning.... Hugs Pangie xx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 5:24:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I am honored that you fav. this poem. yes this poem has a meaning . Hugs Darlene xx
Date: 2/8/2021 11:00:00 AM
Crutches or no crutches he was going on that date Darlene. Hope you're well Tom
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Date: 2/8/2021 11:06:00 AM
Hello tom, yes crutches or no crutches he was going on a date. Yes I am well. thank you. I hope you are to. Enjoy your day my friend.
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