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Describing a Stranger

A stranger was seen Waiting at a bus stop He was short in height His hair was almost grey The colour of his eyes blue He had small narrow nose With a small mustashe That hid his lips well He wore a black suite Followed by a white shirt His tie a royal blue colour His shoes were new black He looked very handsome Being physical challenged He walked with his crutches Now he looks forward to meet- His girlfriend on a date

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/4/2021 9:11:00 PM

What you discribed here, Darlene, was the enthusiasm in this man going to meet his girlfriend, to whom he dressed well for, nothing else was seen, because nothing else mattered, I hope he had a pleasant evening . . . : )

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/5/2021 11:12:00 AM

Hello Indiana Shaw, this man was determined to go on a date with his girlfriend. He succeeded. They had an enjoyable evening sent. Blessing my friend.

Ken Rone

Date: 4/15/2021 11:19:00 AM

Wat a marvelous poem and developed concept...Key word, "Now", it resets the entire poem. Thanks - Your friend, Ken

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/18/2021 3:24:00 PM

Hello Ken Rone, thank you for a wonderful comment Ken. Enjoy your evening my friend Ken.--Darlene

Alkas Poetry

Date: 3/16/2021 6:55:00 AM

A well composed picture, amusing description, a story unfolding for life and for what seems like a happy ending! Nice work my dear, salute alkas

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/18/2021 12:23:00 PM

Hello Alakas, hi! yes story unfolding in my poetry. yes it has a happy ending. Thank you for the lovely comment. Salute Alakas my friend.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 3/10/2021 6:39:00 PM

I pictured him during the reading of both stanzas and I smiled.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2021 6:04:00 AM

Hello Caren so do I picture him the same way. Hugs Darlene.

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 2/21/2021 3:42:00 AM

simple beautiful poem, with a lovely message! Heart is not crippled in love, whatever the physical handicap!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/22/2021 5:41:00 AM

Helllo Krish, yes that is right. the heart is not crippled. He is living his life Blessings my friend.

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/17/2021 6:25:00 AM

What a wonderful deep descriptive poem, Darlene. I wonder were you his date???

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/17/2021 8:13:00 AM

Hello Harry , His date is meeting him at a restaurant for their date. Enjoy your day my friend.

Judy Ball

Date: 2/16/2021 1:15:00 PM

A fine description of the young man at the bus stop. Being physically challenged doesn't mean you can't have fun. Great job. God Bless, JB

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/16/2021 4:07:00 PM

Thank you Judy. Exactly Judy, they can have fun to. Thank you for the lovely comment. Enjoy your evening my friend.

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/15/2021 3:32:00 PM

Charming Darlene. A great write! Linda

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/16/2021 10:41:00 AM

Hello Linda, Fowler, oh, thank you Linda. Enjoy your day my friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/13/2021 11:03:00 AM

- I see he's ready for his date, I hope they have a lovely day :) - Great written, Darlene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2021 3:42:00 PM

Hello Sunshine Smile, yes he is ready for his date. I hope he has a good time. Thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/13/2021 9:47:00 AM

I enjoyed your description of this well dressed man awaiting his date!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2021 10:33:00 AM

Hello Andrea, Andrea, thank you for the lovely comment. Hugs Darlene. Enjoy your day my friend.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/12/2021 8:54:00 PM

You did a fine job of describing this intriguing gentleman, Darlene. He seems destined for a wonderful evening. My very best wishes, Evelyn

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/13/2021 10:38:00 AM

Hello Evelyn, Thank you. Yes I see him having a wonderful date with his girlfriend. enjoy your day my friend.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 2/12/2021 11:57:00 AM

That’s so lovely Darlene, even those who depend on crutches or sticks have a heart, I know because once upon a time in my life those things played a huge part... Belle

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/12/2021 12:36:00 PM

Hello Belle, yes thse that walk with crutches,or in wheelchairs do have a heart. i also was on crutches at one time. Thes people do have a heart. Hugs Darlene

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/11/2021 2:14:00 PM

Very nice! You described this handsome man then let us see his crutches. Nicely done! Hope they had a sweet date!

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/11/2021 2:39:00 PM

Hello Kim, thank you Kim, yes they did have a romantic date. Higs Darlene.

James Mclain

Date: 2/8/2021 5:14:00 PM

Great poem dear and thank you for the input on mine.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 5:19:00 AM

Hello James McLain, oh your welcome i enjoyed your poem very much. Thank you for the lovely comment on this poem I created. Enjoy your day my friend.

Heidi Sands

Date: 2/8/2021 3:49:00 PM

You have described him and the situation so well Darlene. Great one! Have a nice night :)

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 5:20:00 AM

Hello Heidi, Heidi, thank you. I hope you had a good night sleep. Hugs Darlene

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/8/2021 11:47:00 AM

Love this Darlene. Hope you don't mind if I FaV it, this is one of your best. Descriptive with meaning.... Hugs Pangie xx

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/9/2021 5:24:00 AM

Hello Panagiota, I am honored that you fav. this poem. yes this poem has a meaning . Hugs Darlene xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/8/2021 11:00:00 AM

Crutches or no crutches he was going on that date Darlene. Hope you're well Tom

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 2/8/2021 11:06:00 AM

Hello tom, yes crutches or no crutches he was going on a date. Yes I am well. thank you. I hope you are to. Enjoy your day my friend.