Derailed and Running Full Steam Aside

All was certain, the tracks determined
each and every day 
Cold steel certainty dictated 
all thoughts and machinations
complacent
Will the unfeeling rails define us?
Will the force-fed rout devide us?

I stand, a locomotive, raging off the track
teetering engine building steam
throwing all your notions back
to the overbearing brother providing
lies steeped in half truths
deceptive

Shall we dance amongst the littered wreck
of boxcars toppled over?
This free thinking deemed chaotic by compliant passengers
begging for margins to live in.
 
~our brakes never screeched
   as the truth we beseeched is doled out so reluctant
I stand, an illuminating conductor, ready to delve 
outside the railroad ties
seeking new horizons for crashsites



*Inspired by S K A T's "Runaway Train" contest**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 5:39 AM
Congratulations on your win, Steve!
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 4:23 PM
congratulations, its' clear to see you put much work into this one! Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on your win in Irma's "Runaway Train"contest Steve. Good Luck in her next contest. Love, Carol
White Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 6:02 AM
I'm speechless, accelerating read- Congrats on the win Steve
Fraser Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 3:36 AM
Steve, many congratulations on your win in Irma's contest with this wonderful poetry >> James
Sweetheart Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 7:46 PM
Congrats Steve on your winning poem in the Runaway Train Contest... enjoy a special win for a wonderful write..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Brown Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 6:37 AM
It was a pleasure to read your poetry this morning Steve. wishing you the best in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love,Carol
Devonshire Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 3:54 PM
Steve, it's so nice to see you posting again! I like the creative way you compare this period of life to a train wreck. (Mine feels like one at the moment, so I can relate.) Enjoyed very much. Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 2:30 PM
Good one!!! and burn the railroad tressel! Light & Love
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May 17, 2010 at 1:57 PM
well done, good job, good luck in the contest,..p.d.
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