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Derailed

A delayed train and uncooperative weather derailed his plans to seek forgiveness for his mistake now, nerves frayed cold rain hammers down his best suit and shoes no longer pristine his floral apology crumpled just one disaster after another 40words incl title Picture a Sorry wasn't sure where to put this bit.... This is my first ever entry in poetry soup!

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Date: 8/10/2022 3:46:00 AM
So sad! Yet, with a beautiful intention. The intensity of feeling and emotion is beautifully brought out. Congratulations!
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Julie Draper
Date: 8/10/2022 5:49:00 AM
Thank you very much for the kind feedback.

Book: Shattered Sighs