Der Turmfalke

The weight inside a dive;
Drop against the wind;
The reduced quilt of cornfields

Falls over the horizon,
Covers a mess of houses
And lanes,bangs like a wet 

Cloth; heed the hunter`s eyes !
The terrible beauty of sinking
In air, the small last second.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Dietrich Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 11:40 AM
I went to google this word. Is this about the death of a small bird? Wow, it makes quite an IMPACT. pun intended. Your poem is stunning.
Philibert Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Hallo Andrea..it`s a falcon found often on churches or buildings !
Lamoureux Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Intriguing piece that has me wondering if this is a person or a bird.
Philibert Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:51 AM
Hallo Richard, it`s the German word for falcon, thanks for looking at this.
Andresen Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 12:12 PM
- Leslie, a great poem - well done - happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Philibert Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Used a bit of German here, as a line-grabber !
Kendrick Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:29 AM
Interesting work..I think that this is from a sky diving perspective?..Enjoyed reading this morn..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
Philibert Avatar
November 18, 2014 at 9:52 AM
Hallo Sara, thanks for looking at this
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace