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Depths of You

tonight as we sit here on the banks of the creek the opalescent light of moon slips momentarily beneath a cloud and i am swept in the depths of you night's breath is rising then falling delicately across my almost bare skin i shiver beneath the warmth of your tender touch as it mingles in i see the flicker of stars reflecting back from your eyes and i am lost somewhere between the folds of darkness and love's empathetic hold the incandescent light of the moon casts a shadow atop the water that dances in the ebb and flow alluring me further in the depths i am swept away expeditiously by its current i arch my back and surrender beneath its force captive like the moon within her sky my reflection emerges equally full July 2, 2019

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Date: 2/24/2020 8:26:00 AM
As I was swept away by this beautiful sensual poem filled with desire under the light of the moon. So very beautiful Sandy. Sigh~ Congrats on your win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/24/2020 11:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Chris.... hugs
Date: 2/21/2020 5:42:00 PM
Congrats, Sandra. Well deserved. Blessings.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:43:00 PM
Thank you Curtis! :)
Date: 2/21/2020 5:07:00 PM
Sandy congrats my friend on a top win!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 2/21/2020 9:43:00 PM
thanks so much Brenda :)
Date: 2/21/2020 3:34:00 PM
Sandra, So lovely with your vivid moonlight images! I too love the lines that John highlighted. Congratulations on your first placement!
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Date: 2/21/2020 9:42:00 PM
Thank you so much Sam... hugs
Date: 2/21/2020 12:25:00 PM
Sandra, congrats on another win with this beauty of a write. I love "and i am lost somewhere / between the folds of darkness / and love's empathetic hold" Hugs ~ John
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Date: 2/21/2020 9:42:00 PM
thank you so much John... hugs
Date: 7/20/2019 11:27:00 PM
Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Sandra! Bravo. Hugs. Pandita
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/21/2019 11:29:00 AM
Thank you :) hugs
Date: 7/6/2019 5:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your premiere win! This one is beautiful in every way.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/6/2019 1:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Caren.... hugs :)
Date: 7/5/2019 8:33:00 PM
Bravo, Sandra. Awesome imagery. Congrats on your premiere win.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/5/2019 8:43:00 PM
Thank you Line :) hugs
Date: 7/4/2019 10:23:00 PM
I was moved by the sensuous beauty and delicate intensity of your luscious poem, Sandra. Exquisite emotional poetry. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/5/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Susan, i had deleted this poem and started over at once point, leaving my favorite parts and working around them.... hugs :)
Date: 7/4/2019 8:21:00 PM
Magnificent phraseology as only you can do Sandy, congrats on a fine placement in my difficult premium challenge!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/4/2019 9:16:00 PM
Thank you for the placement and for hosting the contest~ My muse likes to be challenged :) hugs
Date: 7/4/2019 8:11:00 PM
Sandra beautiful! Congratulations on your win! Well deserved!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/5/2019 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Brenda, i had to rework this one to get it where i wanted it :) hugs
Date: 7/4/2019 7:49:00 PM
So beautiful, Sandra! Love these lines:/and i am swept/ in the depths of you/ night's breath is rising/ then falling delicately/ so sweet, a lyric of beauty! Congratulations!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/5/2019 10:58:00 AM
Thank you so much Kim, i live near a creek and drew on it for some inspiration! hugs :)
Date: 7/4/2019 7:49:00 AM
Wow, Sandy, romantic, sensual, sizzling...best of luck in the contest. Did I mention I liked this poem. John
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/5/2019 10:59:00 AM
Thank you John, I had to rework this one a couple of times, it worked out for the better, i wasn't satisfied with the first write! hugs :)
Date: 7/3/2019 5:50:00 AM
Such a delightful read Sandy. So well written and with great imagery. Best wishes for a win...hugs Charlie :)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/3/2019 11:59:00 AM
Thank you so much Charlie :) hugs
Date: 7/2/2019 7:20:00 PM
wow, who would not love THIS one, Sandy. I see a big win in your future!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/2/2019 8:41:00 PM
Thank you my friend :). Hugs
Date: 7/2/2019 3:14:00 PM
Smashing piece Sandra, really romantic tones with nice imagery too!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 7/2/2019 5:54:00 PM
thank you Gordon....i enjoy seeing what different themes inspire out of my muse! :) hugs

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