Depression Has Taken Over Me

Hurting inside feel like I am about to cry Like anyone cares that I am dyeing inside I feel 
like I could disappear into thin air and no one would that I wasn't there I could leave 
tomorrow and see that none would know  that I was even there they would cease to care 
Life is about living for today not tomorrow  but no one told me  that it would be filled with 
so much sorrow I feel like giving up and calling it quits because there is nothing  here in 
this world I'm in well I said my piece I said it all now I feel like crawling up into  a tiny little 
ball well that's it that's a wrap it's the end of the show oh wait it's not a show it's my life  
well go on think what you want to think but I lost my Hope and Faith and it's not a 
mistake it's the story of truth being told I am hurting inside that's no lie because now I 
have just died a little more inside

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 4/5/2016 8:51:00 PM
Faith Bradford, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry---LINDA
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Date: 4/16/2011 11:41:00 PM
i hope to write more poems
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Date: 4/11/2011 9:12:00 AM
thank you all for your wonderful comments and i will have hope and keep the faith thank you all god bless and i will be writing more soon so look out for my work Love Faith
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Date: 4/11/2011 4:09:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Faith. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/10/2011 7:17:00 PM
Even in the challenging times there is hope. Hang onto that thought and keep the faith. My prayers go with you. Welcome to Poetry Soup! Karen
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Date: 4/10/2011 12:45:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv.. depression is a horrible feeling .. be encouraged as life is a joy and u are an integral part of it ... luv..
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Date: 4/10/2011 6:29:00 AM
Lifes heart ache and tremors is what builds us into a stronger person, tough to see when hurt and sadness take over but it shall shine on you too...
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