Eve Roper Poet Free verse

Depression

Strange sardonic shadow stands and stares, 
                       but  when I turn and look their spent force

Spirited less and scraggly   I have become set.  Hallucinations or are they real? 


12/4/2016

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Kai Michael Neumann December 16, 2016 at 11:22 AM This poem is brilliant. Congratulations on your win. Real hallucinations, great. Many wishes, Kai

Andrea Dietrich December 9, 2016 at 8:49 PM VERY nicely done, Eve!! Big congrats.

Deborah Burch December 9, 2016 at 9:28 AM Well Done,Eve!! Hugggs,Deb.

Agnes Krampe December 9, 2016 at 7:09 AM Congrats on your win, Eve. Love the alliterations.

White Wolf December 9, 2016 at 4:15 AM Well done on your win

Alexis Y. December 9, 2016 at 2:57 AM Hi Eve, Congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Joanna Daniel December 9, 2016 at 2:05 AM Great alliterative way to describe depression, Eve:) congratulations on top win:)

Doug Vinson December 9, 2016 at 12:26 AM Congratulations, Eve - you made it real. The little 'Captcha' box says "YAY." (It really does. : ) -- On a lighter note, yes, they are real - you have described some of my co-workers.

Darren White December 9, 2016 at 12:21 AM Very good short on depression. Congratulations!

Alexis Y. December 8, 2016 at 1:45 PM Hi Eve, This is good take on depression. Well done. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Laura Leiser December 5, 2016 at 2:55 PM This is an interesting take on depression, Eve. I like it, very creative! Good luck in the contest :)

Nette Onclaud December 5, 2016 at 12:23 PM total alienation so well expressed, eve... huggs Eve Roper December 5, 2016 at 2:36 PM Thank you so much for the inspiration. Have a Merry Christmas

Probir Gupta December 5, 2016 at 8:54 AM Very well expressed ... Nice alliteration ... Eve Roper December 5, 2016 at 12:22 PM Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year

Chris Green December 5, 2016 at 7:57 AM This was an amazing piece of poetry Eve. The depth of these motions and the loneliness are definitely felt in your words. Eve Roper December 5, 2016 at 12:22 PM Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration: ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year

Jan Allison December 5, 2016 at 1:44 AM I am struggling to write on the subject as I'm not a sufferer Eve - you have described it well:-) hugs jan xx

White Wolf December 4, 2016 at 11:58 PM Yes, depression is a terrible thing! Great write on the subject, Eve, and good luck! Eve Roper December 5, 2016 at 12:23 PM Thank you so very much for the kind words of inspiration, Rick. : ) Hugs Eve Have a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year